The Poetry Thread.........

[ShowTime]

I don't want this life.
Why do I cry these tears?
Are they even mine?
Only your eyes can tell,
Subtle thoughts so divine.
The inner-most petal of a wilted rose,
You protect it from my soul, my eyes.
And though I am trusted most,
You insist on trying to hide.
Inside the looking glass
I cast my own reflection.
But I see you
I feel you.
These thoughts of suicide
have taken new direction.
Since I've known you
and I hold you.
No longer self inflicted,
The hurt pains from outside.
For beneath that wilted rose,
is your heart that you hide.
I don't want this life...                    

[Evangelion_01]

Powerful image there Showtime.

*wipes a growing tear away*

Powerful imagery. That don't even need a title.                    

[Anonymous]

I don't want this life.
Why do I cry these tears?
Are they even mine?
Only your eyes can tell,
Subtle thoughts so divine.
The inner-most petal of a wilted rose,
You protect it from my soul, my eyes.
And though I am trusted most,
You insist on trying to hide.
Inside the looking glass
I cast my own reflection.
But I see you
I feel you.
These thoughts of suicide
have taken new direction.
Since I've known you
and I hold you.
No longer self inflicted,
The hurt pains from outside.
For beneath that wilted rose,  
is your heart that you hide.
I don't want this life...

really sweet poem hoss                    

[Aka_Neo]

There's lots of things
With which I'm blessed,
Tho' my life's been both Sunny and Blue,
But of all my blessings,
This one's the best:
To have a friend like you.

In times of trouble
Friends will say,
"Just ask... I'll help you through it."
But you don't wait for me to ask,
You just get up
And you do it!

And I can think
Of nothing in life
That I could more wisely do,
Than know a friend,
And be a friend,
And love a friend... like you.                    

[Polios]

nice poem ak
here's a new one of mine

Death's Kiss
by Kishan Solomon


Silent in the dark,
I stay awake,
Hearing my mark,
I head for the lake.

Below the silk sky,
I slowly slip,
Softer than a sigh,
On a whispered lip.

Silent in the dark,
I stay awake,
My neck in an ark,
You begin to break.

My blood is cold,
I let out a hiss,
Breaking the mold,
You feel the cobra's kiss.

Silent in the dark,
I stay awake,
Killing the lark,
I am the snake.


Copyright of Polios Productions                    

[PyroSlasher]

Heres another one I made this term.

Can I help you?

You dont know the pain you caused my heart
in hope that we will never part.
I tried my best to do whats right,
or at least whats right in your line of sight.
And I even took heavan in my hands
and turned it upside down again
but you never ever seem to know
or you just never let your feelings show.
And I know it's hard for you to tell,
but the feeling's burning just like....hell!

Chorus:
WHAT DO YOU WANT FROM ME? x4

And I look at you and I can see
the pain for all eternity
that I will go through just for you
if I be what you want me to.
I need to find a way to ease the pain
cause I'm feeling like I'm going insane.
I want to feel the way I did before
and not be cursed with you forever more.
So the only way to end this strife
is to take away your very......life!

Chorus

I!!!!!
TRIED MY BEST,
I GAVE EVERYTHING BUT YOU NEVER LEARNED THAT,
YOU!!!!!
CHANGED MY HEART,
YOU WRECKED MY LIFE AND THEN YOU THREW IT AWAY.
BUT NOW!!!!!
TIMES HAVE CHANGED,
YOUR THROUGH AND NOW IT'S TIME FOR YOU TO FACE ME!

FACE ME! x3

WHAT DID YOU WANT FROM ME? x4                    

[Anonymous]

aye ppl i recently got some mails and emails from Poetry.com
where i submitted one of my poems in a contest
that i am up for Poet of the Year 2003 award.
sweet but i can't go....
neways here is the poem


I Need You
I find myself here again
Alone in the dark
I am tired of it all
I am scared of it all

The outside world calls out to me
I hear its song
And I see its light
Its terrifying to look into

It calls for me to join it
But I am scared to face it
All by myself
I don't want to be alone out there

I need you to be with me
To help me face it
I need you to be there with me
So I won't be alone out there
I need you to be with me
So I would be scared no more
I need you to love me.


Vijay Prandeo Ramnine

Copyright ©2004 Vijay Prandeo Ramnine                    

[Aka_Neo]

The chinaberry leans against the shed
Or does the shed incline upon the tree?

(I leaned on love and love was stayed by me)

When decrepitude befalls the one or the other,
bereft of its support, will stay a little while
until a winter gale uproots or flattens shed or tree.

(I leaned on love and love was stayed by me)                    

[Aka_Neo]

Because of u

I see in you my tangled head
With all our love and friendship dead.
Now tears of salt flow bright and red
...Because of you

I get frustrated and annoyed
Because of pains I can't avoid
The shattered heart, left destroyed
...Because of you

You weren't man enough to say you're wrong
And left me hanging for so long
Now I feel I don't belong
...Because of you

I feel pity for your sake
One day your heart will also break
I have learned from my mistake
...Because of you                    

[Aka_Neo]

TO LOVE U

to love you is to fear you,
to cry when you're away,
to see you in my every thoughts,
to want you every day.

to love you is an addiction,
to want you, makes me ill.
every look i lay upon you,
makes my world stand still.

to hear you is a living dream
of words i've heard before,
to touch you is like a dangerous drug
that leaves me needing more.

to smell you takes my every breath,
i get lost in your colonge.
to love you is to hurt inside
whenever i'm alone.

to taste your lips leaves me numb,
to hold you leaves me whole
to love you is to need you,
to know you, moves my soul.                    

[Angelus]

lo thy uncreating divine
thy empire chaos
from the darkness within
I stood wandering,peering,hoping
dreaming dreams no mortal
ever dreamt before

for in dark heaven & sweet hell
there is no evil, so cruel,so dark
so wholly godless,that which we penetrate each other
Odin's wain ''ursa major''

draven's legacy                    

[New Era Outlaw]

What is WRONG with you people?!
Don't you know that the opening theme for Mr. Ed is THE greatest example of poetry ever made?!
For crying out loud, that horse can SURF!




...and you people are probably the same one that say eating nutty butter on a doubles is crazy. Well I AM CRAZY, SO THERE!!! [nyah]

Wait a minute....THAT didn't turn out right....                    

[Aka_Neo]

that is one heck of a funny pic a horse surfing.....lol.                    

[Aka_Neo]

You were once so close
   that every breath I took was deeper than the last.
You were once so dear
   that butterflies invaded everything inside me.
You were once so enchanting
   my feet never touched the floor.
You were once everything
   I could ever dream of and more,

But you're not there anymore.

You were once so unbelievable
   that wings peeked from behind you.
You were once so charming
   fairy tales were no comparison.
You were once so close to a dream
   that when I finally went to kiss you,
   I realized I had missed my chance.

You were once
everything I could ever dream of
and more,

But you're not there anymore.                    

[Polios]

nice poem, aka, it very deep
here's one of mine


3 Step Nirvana
by Kishan Solomon


Here's the first part,
It's time to remember,
Before I lost my art,
All before that December.

There's the black beast,
As it pounces once more,
And begins it's feast,
I see the forgotten door.

I hear my name,
I remember it well,
All my power and fame,
All mine to sell.

Look at those sheep,
Oh they're so meek,
I've earned my keep,
But they're still too weak.

Alone atop my dune,
I see it all,
I see the moon,
I saw my fall.

Here's the second phase,
Are you really ready,
Time to enter the maze,
Please try to keep steady.

Lost and alone,
But I feel strong,
No reason to moan,
Comparitively It can't be long.

Finally breaking the wall,
I feel so free,
Standing tall,
I'm finally....Me.

AH, Just DIE!!!!!
The Final stage,
They'll all fry,
Here comes the rage!

My furious flame,
They are so blind,
We aren't the same,
I can't take it,
I feel to mame,
Oh God no, Oh God please,
They are to blame.

Douse the fire,
Soak the Pyre,
The format's made new,
So sensitive, I feel the dew.

I'm finally here,
I've faced my fear,
Just had to try,
To just stop the lie.

I have my task,
No matter if I ask,
So here must I go,
Enter into the fro.                    

[Polios]

here's another poem, but it isn't that good


Death's Flight
by Kishan Solomon


The silk coat reflected light,
The only way to tell it apart,
From the beautiful night.

Moving quickly,
Gracefully in the sky,
Watching all,
Looking for death.

The whispering wind,
It brushed his feathers,
As he landed,
Silent like his life,
Like the night.

Crouching his head,
like a predator,
Just as his ancestors,
Less danger but the same style.

His beady black eyes,
Like the shadows in which he lived,
Peircing the darkness,
To peer at the black beyond.

Finally he saw something,
He shivered,
Dark, cold eyes of a omen,
But he represented death too,
Why should he fear?

Watching it came,
With its hood of flesh,
Eyes filled with cruelty,
Eyes filled with death.

He let let out a soft hiss,
Which broke the silence,
The bird couldn't stop staring,
Completely mesmorized.

He wouldn't fall for this,
He broke the trance,
And darted forward,
Into his enemy,
Screaming a crow of death.

The snake slithered and growled,
Always prepared,
Countering he bit its wing,
The edge where only feathers lay.

The bird pecked his foe,
But flew soon enough,
Darkness lay above,
Danger lay below,
Death lay all around,

His enemy found a next victim,
Smelling it in the air,
But the bird was ready,
Prepared for his second attack,
His first death.

He swooped,
His heart racing,
His talons sharp,
The figure below,
It faced away.

The bird streched his claws,
Tearing through the scales,
The captured neck swerved,
He was thrown off,
Before he landed,
He found fangs impaled in him.

A hiss was heard from afar,
Another hunter,
One not satisfied

The serpent towered over,
He opened his mouth,
With a loud hiss,
Began his feasting ritual,
Slower than necessary.

A shadow came over the stars,
All light fading,
Seeing nothing,
The raven whimpered,
He was... nevermore                    

[Aka_Neo]

love has pain and suffering:

Torn hearts,
Broken dreams,
Fading memories.

Peirced thoughts,
Dying souls,
Unending tears.

Lost feelings,
Shattered hopes,
A forgotten, withered rose.

The charred remains of a burnt out love
Never to be forgotten
Left to linger in my aching soul, forever

I had no choice but to accept my fate
That you no longer wanted me
I was simply brushed aside, as you moved on

You said you no longer felt the same about me,
And about us
You no longer loved me the way you said you did

My heart was crying for you to change your mind
And tell me you made a mistake
But you never did

I wanted you to think i was strong
So i held in all my feelings
I made it look that way

My friends thought i would be alright
But they couldn't tell either
I was dying inside without you

I am still afraid to look at you
Your face is too familiar
And, in your eyes i see all of our memories                    

[Aka_Neo]

dreams
 "Love is a gift- not a obligation. Never take it for granted..."  
Send me dreams of wonder,
Scented by a rose;
Draped in love and passion,
Warmed by candle glow;

Send me dreams of islands,
Lapped by turquoise waves;
Silver sirens calling
Of Eden's endless days.

Send me dreams of music,
Danced in love's caress,
Holding me enraptured,
Imagining your kiss.

Send me dreams to treasure
From your distant shore,
For though I may be dreaming,
I could not love you more.                    

[perfectdrug]

There's lots of things
With which I'm blessed,
Tho' my life's been both Sunny and Blue,
But of all my blessings,
This one's the best:
To have a friend like you.

In times of trouble
Friends will say,  
\"Just ask... I'll help you through it.\"
But you don't wait for me to ask,
You just get up  
And you do it!

And I can think  
Of nothing in life  
That I could more wisely do,
Than know a friend,
And be a friend,  
And love a friend... like you.

...when did u write this poem???                    

[Aka_Neo]

i eh start this thread for u to come and start spamming up d thread and right now i eh going and waste my breathe on such a pitiful person..sigh