Artwork on the net

[New Era Outlaw]

Hey guys...
I've submitted a few pieces of my artwork to several site owners, and a couple are now hosting a few of them! I wanted to know, if it isn't too much trouble, if you guys could take a peek and tell me what you think.
Here are the URLs which will lead you directly to the pics:

http://superyo.webheberg.com/agu/fanfic/ry...n/kimifinal.jpg
http://superyo.webheberg.com/agu/fanfic/ry...an/kimilulu.jpg
[Fair warning: I'm an 'All Grown Up' fan, and I created these pics in honour of my favorite character on the series.]

http://www.ciel-network.com/Neo2/new1.jpg
http://www.ciel-network.com/Neo2/new-1.jpg
http://www.ciel-network.com/Neo2/new-2.jpg
http://www.ciel-network.com/Neo2/new-3.jpg
http://www.ciel-network.com/Neo2/rollx001.jpg
http://www.ciel-network.com/Neo2/RollX2copy.jpg

The above five links under the 'Ciel Network' links are rough sketches of what my character, Roll X, should look like. 'New-3' was the very first concept sketch of my character, and the others show my development of Roll X over time. 'RollXcopy2' is the most recent incarnation of my character, and my very first exploit in Adobe Photoshop.
If you wish to learn more about Roll X's character, and you're a fan of the Mega Man X series, you can refer to this piece of fanfiction as well:


http://www.ciel-network.com/TheOriginofRol...lX-Partone.html

The other parts haven't been posted yet.
Here's one of the pics to whet your appetite....




Well, that's it from me for now.
Check it out, come back, reply, and let me know what you think!
Thanks in advance!                      

[New Era Outlaw]

Guys, I'll be honest with you.
With the exception of SPK and UmiIruka, whom I thank wholeheartedly for their comments and honesty, nobody who has paid a visit to this thread, has even responded to give me even a little comment.
Please guys, I asking you to let me know what you think, so I can better myself as an artist. It makes me feel so...unappreciated when people just pass by without as much as a single word to help me out here.

Please guys...I know some of you have passed by and seen what I have to offer...let me know what you think?                    

[snake_eater]

some of them are lookin good but the others are just..................
unexplainable!                    

[Heady]

Ok u're drawings are excellent.
de shading is good.

but u got to work on the backgrounds, the drawings look totally out of place.
Explore Photoshop some more it could do wonderful things.
(I know u said it was u're first time with Phtoshop)

but anybody could do Filter: Render clouds.
and concerning New-3 nobody could bend like that.

Still keep up the work practice makes perfect                    

[Evangelion_01]

Wow...just...wow...

Now I'll be honest-I never saw this series before, much less heard of it. But your sketches and drawings here are amazing NEO! Damn well done! Great shadings and backgrounds and very even.

But just for the sake of understanding-PM me some links where I can find a synopsis on this series if you get some time?                    

[New Era Outlaw]

some of them are lookin good but the others are just..................
unexplainable!

All right! I finally got some feedback!
Anyway, snake_eater, big thanks for the comments, but, uh....I don't know what you meant by unexplainable....
Is there something about the pictures you noticed?                    

[New Era Outlaw]

Wow...just...wow...

Now I'll be honest-I never saw this series before, much less heard of it. But your sketches and drawings here are amazing NEO! Damn well done! Great shadings and backgrounds and very even.

But just for the sake of understanding-PM me some links where I can find a synopsis on this series if you get some time?

Thanks a bunch for taking a peek at my pics, Evangelion_01!
I always try my best.
Unfortunately, I don't really think much of my backgrounds, since, as everybody else puts it, they need a lot of work. But soon, I'll be able to master them just as well as my figure drawings.
I'll pm you the synopsis on the series soon, but you have to have a firm grasp of the current storyline in Mega Man X to fully get the storyline in Roll X.
Thanks once again for your comments!                    

[New Era Outlaw]

Ok u're drawings are excellent.
de shading is good.

but u got to work on the backgrounds, the drawings look totally out of place.
Explore Photoshop some more it could do wonderful things.
(I know u said it was u're first time with Phtoshop)

but anybody could do Filter: Render clouds.
and concerning New-3 nobody could bend like that.

Still keep up the work practice makes perfect

Thanks a lot for your input, Handsome.
I would just like to say that you are right about the backgrounds, they indeed do look out of place. I'm trying my absolute hardest to improve each and every day, that is why I just had to insist on you guys takinga  few cracks at me...it helps to improve myself as an artist.
New-3 was alos just a little sketch on my part a few years ago, way before I learned proportions...ah, well, live and learn, right?

BTW, do you recognise the character in the file named 'KimiLulu'?
Either way, I mean...                    

[Evangelion_01]

Well no problem man-it always cheers me up to see someone develop a talent that I lost a while back. So I'm behind you all the way

BUT comming to the Megaman/Roll storylines...gonna hafta do a lil homework there by myself...the storyline is missing a few bits in my head.