Author Topic: Writer's anyone? (Read 67211 times)

Ickori · « **Reply #60 on:** December 03, 2003, 07:42:28 AM »

That was real good DG but if you write so well u shouldn't be terrified of showing ppl.What sense does it make to have a gift and do nothing with it.
Well i never show anybody what i write either eh so.....

Carigamers · « **Reply #60 on:** December 03, 2003, 07:42:28 AM »

androsovic · « **Reply #61 on:** December 03, 2003, 04:00:37 PM »

i too lazy to write or maybe lack of time.when i havbe time,i show some of my better writings.MUAHAHHAH

Imperial_X · « **Reply #62 on:** December 03, 2003, 05:27:51 PM »

In writing, we reveal much of ourselves in the process. It's a window into your very being. The way you use words and formulate ideas can tell much about a person at times. It's just the fear of being judged or overly criticized in a open forum so to speak that prevents us from doing so.

Is there a reason NOT to be terrified?

The_Dark_Goddess · « **Reply #63 on:** December 04, 2003, 12:07:56 AM »

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In writing, we reveal much of ourselves in the process. It's a window into your very being. The way you use words and formulate ideas can tell much about a person at times. It's just the fear of being judged or overly criticized in a open forum so to speak that prevents us from doing so.

Is there a reason NOT to be terrified?

point taken!

and yeah my writing is a big part of me, it's like reading or breathing.

recently my problems have been time and inspiration, and while i know you can be your own inspiration (and i HAVE been that for a long time) something is definately missing because its getting harder to put things to words and then to paper.

oh yeah! and i even with my "lack of inspiration" i have a very very serious problem: i KNOW i can create amazing characters and fantastic worlds with complicated societies or simple societies or both etc etc....but i never have anything to DO with it!!!!

Evangelion_01 · « **Reply #64 on:** December 04, 2003, 12:32:54 AM »

My characters eat, live, sleep, breathe as much as I do. Each and every one is an extension of my mind and thoughts. Nuff love to Imperial for his wisdom post there.

Carigamers · « **Reply #64 on:** December 04, 2003, 12:32:54 AM »

Ickori · « **Reply #65 on:** December 04, 2003, 01:22:50 PM »

I have written three poems but I want Goddess' approval before I post them so goddess check ur messages
This is the first real poem I have ever written.
Yeah wellI wanted to say that the emotion you are feelin at the time inspires u to write.
Am I correct.

The_Dark_Goddess · « **Reply #66 on:** December 04, 2003, 07:03:11 PM »

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I have written three poems but I want Goddess' approval before I post them so goddess check ur messages
This is the first real poem I have ever written.
Yeah wellI wanted to say that the emotion you are feelin at the time inspires u to write.
Am I correct.

u are correct

u want my approval??!!!??!?

!??? wheeeeeeeeeeeey i feel so special

its so touching!!! omg...i cant believe that...MY approval...i feelin like a shillin...oh my gosh!!!

i read them, and they have it.
i didnt realise u post this b4 u sent them i just though u sent them, lol.

omg!!! *is flattered*

Imperial_X · « **Reply #67 on:** December 04, 2003, 08:21:12 PM »

Damn smiley!!!!!!

Imperial_X · « **Reply #68 on:** December 04, 2003, 09:35:05 PM »

Anyways, this is something I've been working on.

Still needs some work.

Now begins the end of my Salvation.
I beckon to her, return to me,
and she neglects that fact, the reason that we should be alone together,
through stormy weather and grayedish skies,
Accepting lies that this vicious life has to offer,
In my dreams and strife I think more of her.

You were my sweet release from earthly bounds,
You took me to new found grounds,
You remade earth and life to me,
You were the calm waters of my sea...my sea...
My sea of troubles, my sea of pain,
I would do it all again,
To feel you in my wary arms,
Never to be alone again....as I was before.

You left me here destitute and forlorn,
I've forged strength now to go on...with life, ever still remembering,
What we had, what we were, it was such a precious thing,
But you didn't think that at that time,
Now that I think back on those times.

My mind has entered this dark dimesnion,
Harassed by horrors too horrid to mention,
And from the wounds of chaos bleeds,
Crimson regret, my soul now needs,
Deliverance from this cruel, cold world of hate,
Farewell to you my fair......soul-mate.

Fault · « **Reply #69 on:** December 05, 2003, 01:45:19 AM »

OH MY GOOD GRIEF. I write up one long long thing out of mind only to get some error page an it gone? Good LORD!!! No more direct posting for me nuh. Write in word and copy paste. Showtime don laugh at meh this not funny. Anyway. In the past I have been very love-crazy at times and most times that was when I wrote and my writing relects it, and I not sure If to put this here because all your writing so far seems to be broody and sad and kill yaself kina thin. I not too sure how alya will react to my happy-in-love vibe.

True Feeling

I asked myself, what is love?
I know it’s what I feel when I see you.
When you stand near to me,
And just to breathe is hard to do.

When I see you and our eyes meet,
I start shaking, my heart starts to dance.
It’s hard to stand, harder yet to speak,
It’s like you put me into a trance.

But all this feels heavenly,
When I look at you, I see a kind heart, a vision of beauty.
I wish I could just come out and say I love you,
But I guess this will just have to do.

All this rhyme about how I feel,
Is simply put into a line or two,
There is someone I need in my life…
And, that someone, is you…

Fault · « **Reply #70 on:** December 05, 2003, 02:03:50 AM »

I recreated what I just lost but I don't think It's got the substance what I wrote before had.

The Confusion

I like you, I know I do, Or do I?
But nonetheless you confound me so!
I finally get the courage to talk to you
My heart sighs when you say you like me too
And then you treat me the way you always do…
Confusion….confusion….
I’ll be more caring, more sensitive,
I’ll show you that you matter most.
When I see you I yearn for your loving touch,
Or maybe I’m expecting too much….
I’ll work out and become more attractive
I look inward an answer hoping to see
But maybe the problem isn’t me…
Confusion…confusion
There are others who I see,
Who are very attractive, even if maybe just to me….
Should I forget about you and move on?
Should I close us up. Open new doors?
I wonder how do you really feel, but I know I need to feel loved…
How will you react? What will you say?
Should I, Should I not?
I’ve never been more confused than this day….

I don't think It has much rythm but the writer is confused so maybe the erratic rythm adds to it.... It's also exactly how I feel so I'll leave it at that.....

Fault · « **Reply #71 on:** December 05, 2003, 02:21:45 AM »

I dunno about the other writers but If you find my stuff Is seriously flawed or lame or that you don't like it please say so and If you can, give reasons. I don't just wanna hear the 'that's nice' that everybody Is accustomed saying I wanna grow.

Ickori · « **Reply #72 on:** December 05, 2003, 10:50:59 AM »

wheysssssss fault that real bad.
It have depth and I like your style of writing. I also like how you question everything, it really helps the reader feel like your looking for an answer to keep yourself contented, if you know what I mean.
Any way here is one poem I have written and with DG's approval.

In times of joy I feel sorrow
In times of sorrow I feel joy
Those who anger me anger themselves
I am without meaning therefore untouchable
Your words do naught upon my soul
Your lashes strike my back and blood seeps out
I fall to the ground with a cry but I feel none of it
I am the weakest in strength
Yet the most powerful in mind
Say what you want but I will always be victorious
My soul is strong so I am not harmed
By any physical attacks
Emotions kill me and have my soul to weep
Everyone has a weakness.

It has no name though....

Ickori · « **Reply #73 on:** December 05, 2003, 10:53:21 AM »

This be another one hope you like it...

A void lies inside me
Whilst I am full of hatred
The Darkness creeps upon me

I look into a dark unlit sky
A shadow is what drives me
One thought of my empty soul
Breaks any joy I could possibly have
The Darkness creeps upon me

My eyes are stained with blood of another
I can’t change what I have already done
Why would I want to?
There is nothing that can stop me now
But yet still….
The Darkness creeps upon me

How did I become what I am now?
Was there nothing I could have done to stop myself?
I know I shall be punished for the evil that I have done
All that I do is prolong the inevitable
I am infallible
This is my fate
The Darkness has come

yet another no named....

Imperial_X · « **Reply #74 on:** December 05, 2003, 11:59:36 AM »

Real ppl here could wax poetic. It's good to see that we aren't a dying breed.

Ickori · « **Reply #75 on:** December 05, 2003, 02:10:08 PM »

Dying breed....I think not.ppl just don't normally show there true skills.( but you imperial could surely show how to beat men in svc)

Guru · « **Reply #76 on:** December 05, 2003, 03:43:21 PM »

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ey guru ah did not see androsovic in that story.FREE URSELF FROM AMERICAN SLAVERY! SUPPORT COMMUNISM!

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tho unseen bullets whisper past

That was for you sniper boy

Guru · « **Reply #77 on:** December 05, 2003, 03:44:48 PM »

i have littlerally a ton of stuff, but written in my more "teenage angst days" lol so i don't think you guys would be interested in that...Not that much is new...

Imperial_X · « **Reply #78 on:** December 05, 2003, 03:49:11 PM »

Aren't we all rebels in need to express ourselves? The rage must come out.

Fault · « **Reply #79 on:** December 06, 2003, 12:33:03 AM »

Indeed. But there is a lot more than anger to express....

Carigamers · « **Reply #79 on:** December 06, 2003, 12:33:03 AM »

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