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[tha_pong]

As I lay here beside you
Looking into your beautiful eyes
My aching heart breaks in two
For I know this is really good-bye

As the stars shine down from up above
Casting an illuminating glow,
You pull me even closer to you
And ask me- why I have to go

Before I have a chance to answer
Your soft lips press against mine
And all our emotions building up inside
Show through in that kiss, divine

You softly whisper that you love me
And a tear slips down my cheek
I love you with all my heart and soul
More than words could ever speak

As we kiss with intense emotions
To you, my soul tries to convey
The many things that are on my mind
All my heart is wanting to say...

"Thank you for coloring my world
Your smile always brightened my day
You are my ray of sunshine
Whenever my skies are gray"

"Thank you for your friendship
Which gave our love a base
A foundation that we built upon
Leaving us memories no distance can erase"

"I'll never forget our phone calls
That lasted late into the night
No matter how the day had gone
Just hearing your voice made everything right"

"We could tell each other anything
There are so many secrets between just us two
You opened up your heart to me
And I opened mine to you"

"Thank you for all the stolen glances
And conversations with just our eyes
That let me look into your soul
And always made my spirit rise"

"Thank you for the tears we shared
When suddenly things went wrong
We've been through SO much together
And I've loved you all along"

"Our problems brought us closer together
Something I thought was impossible to do
And it was then I realized
How much our love was true"

"Thank you for all the hugs and kisses
That let me know how much you care
When words could not say how you felt
I knew that you would always be there"

"Thank you for all our special moments
Loving looks, kisses, and intimacy
Our times together, I'll always treasure
My endless love you'll always be"

"Thank you for all the passion
You take my breath away
I'll miss all your sweet caresses
In your arms is where I want to stay"

Thank you for all the romance
You always knew how to melt my heart
I'll never forget my life with you
Even when we're miles apart"

"Thank you for your love
And for teaching me how to love too
There will always be a special place in my heart
A place where I'll always love you"

"But now I am forced to move away
Leaving you and my heart behind
I'll eventually HAVE to let go to move on
But I know you will always be on my mind"

"It will be so hard for me to let go
I'll never forget the times we've shared
You mean more to me than life itself
No one else will ever compare"

"But if I ever fall in love again
(A thought I cannot comprehend)
I will still love you, but in a different way
For you will always be my best friend"

"I hope you know how much you've meant to me
And how much you always will
As the time comes to go, there's a void in my heart
An emptiness that no one can ever fill."

The clock strikes midnight
It's time for this two year fairy tale to end
We hold each other close and kiss a final kiss
And whisper, "We'll always be best friends"

There's one more thing I must say
As tears now flow with ease
I'll never forget you, my first true love,
Thank you for the memories...                    

[tha_pong]

As I look at the stars at night
and dream of what is to be...
My heart begins to smile
for it is you I see.
Knowing that you're close
but yet so far away.
I dream of you at night
and think about you every day.
For every moment without you
seems like an eternity.
I dream of the day we kiss
and I can hold you close to me.
So until that day comes
you'll always be on my mind.
And I will love you till the end
till the end of time.                    

[The_Dark_Goddess]

wow that one was long.
great stuff there by showtime and the rest, i agree the mix of gods is odd, but it works. Well i back home, later than i thought, yet also earlier. I will dig around in my stash of unfinished stuff and see if i can drag out a decent excerpt or two.
Hopefully it can match the other stuff i've seen :shock:                    

[Zero-X]

nice stories

i like Zero-X's story, it is very detailed and truly creates a world well
it's not something that is greatly original, but it isn't made from anything alone that i know of

well at least someone likes my story, makes me feel to finish it...if i can get my mind rollin on it...                    

[Fault]

Vigard Haze: Psychic Swordsman

“I’m bored, I wonder If anything exciting will happen soon?” Vigard questioned himself as he sauntered along. He is normally quite content with his ordinary life and the fact that he happened to ask himself this induces premonitions within him. He spies a town in the distance and thinks to himself, “I wonder if there are any nice girls?” For such a trained warrior his weakness is a quite regular one; intelligent, attractive women. “It’s time for me to get off this road, I seem to have been walking so long that my sword is getting heavy!” he mused, for we all know that the Mental-Blade style he has self-taught does not entail him physically carrying the sword.
 
He finally enters the town and shoots straight to the nearest hotel, which happens to be a hotel/bar call the Ristia. The sign looks to be outfitted with neon lights, which he notices even thought they aren’t readily visible during the day. He enters the building, takes two steps and realizes he has somehow captured the attention of everyone in the room. Why shouldn’t he? His slender-muscled 18-year old body, deep blue clothes and back-mounted sword totally clashed with the hotel’s “chic” theme and pinstriped business clientele, not to mention his signature melancholy demeanor in such a place of great enjoyment.

“Too rich for my blood.” he mutters as he turns to leave. He then notices a beautiful girl to his left getting an eyeful of him and winks at her. “My training is starting to pay off, I better kick it up a notch”. Vigard has always been obsessed with how he looks and is constantly trying to improve himself, maybe with good reason, maybe without. He leaves the hotel and continues on his way through the town. He soon spots a smaller, more humble Inn and decides to bed there for the night…

Thinking about how to improve himself, physically, mentally, emotionally… constant sporadic, lateral thoughts swirling, spreading, culminating at a recurring climax where he feels utter frustration and clenches his fist, flashes of people, places… feelings of love, attraction, decisions left in abeyance, rage at himself for being so pathetic or so in his own sight, great desire to understand, great desire for savoir-faire, to be a hero or to just not be so regular. Then the pain; a pulsating rhythm of noise, waves of agony. Then a feeling of difference; just knowing that something inside you has greatly changed.

Vigard awakens from a dream of the night he unlocked his innate mental abilities. “That night when staring at the ceiling… Nothing can describe it… I don’t think I will ever lose this dream… I just wished I hadn’t discovered by pulling my shoe smack-dab into the middle of my face…” Vigard chuckled, rolled over and returned to the land of dreams.                    

[Anonymous]

damn need to get my pc back up and working

got my short stories
and my novella on there
hmmm
damn it!
curse little brothers everywhere!                    

[Chaos]

how come nobody writin any haiku?? anyone ever try that?                    

[Aka_Neo]

cuz ppl like they like love poetry                    

[Aka_Neo]

She's not exactly part of my family, but she's my best friend... and to me that’s close enough! We are VERY close! She is always there for me and she always knows what to say!
Best Friend

We had a three-way friendship going on. There was this other girl who keeps trying to break us to apart. She will tell my other friend something I said- and I never said it! Then she will tell me something that my Best friend didn't say. The problem started when Brooke and I became such good friends. Apparently she gets jealous and tries to separate us.                    

[Aka_Neo]

if ppl not postin plenty on this forum and i and i have poems and stories to express i goin and post plenty                    

[Aka_Neo]

When we were little,
I would share my milk with you
before we took our naps;
   ...just so I could play with you.

When we were teens,
I listened as you talked about your boyfriends,
(and thought of us together);
   ...just to ease your mind.

When we grew older,
I helped you move into his house
(and wished you were going to mine);
   ...just to make you comfortable.

When you got married,
I gave my best friend away
(and kept my heart hid);
   ...just to see you happy.

As you lay there, so very sick,
I whisper how beautiful you are
(because it's still true);
   ...just to see you smile.                    

[Aka_Neo]

I heard a sound today, my friend,
Such a sound I heard
Like angels singing in my heart
Like children playing in the park
Like babbling streams through misty dark
'Twas such a sound I heard

I heard a sound today, my friend,
Such a sound I heard
Like cry I heard from my first born
Like bluebirds call in early morn'
Like velvet silence before a storm
'Twas such a sound I heard

I heard a sound today, my friend,
Such a sound I heard
That sound I heard... it was my Choice
Now I'm in love with your sweet voice...
Forgive me!                    

[Anonymous]

Magic, Bright, Eternity,
No man can make his own,
Striving to live his life,
Strange is the thing one does,
Black, Darkness, Upon his soul,
Straining the heart, Slow poison,
An ache so deep the soul hurts,
A slow and soft tune played,
A sad melody of downfall,
The stench grows unbearable,
Eyes closed, mind rotten through,
Greed, Desire, Hate, Jealousy,
Attack with force upon the body,
Pain, Great pain of burden,
Why must it be so,
When can it go, to leave in peace,
Never to return to destroy.

Eyes stare deeply into space,
Silently combing the vast universe,
A sensation, A feeling of dread,
Racing in despair, The heart beats,
He must take what he receives,
What was earned by him,
This it is to be, or is it?,
Questions that come to mind,
Non that are answered and may never be,
To him who follows the material,
Wanting what he sees,
Never seeing the light of the spiritual,
The spirit within him,
A spirit of love,
A spirit free.                    

[Zero-X]

let's put it this way, poems are more expressive than haiku...                    

[Chaos]

For that special someone.......

Every night before the lights out,
I say a silent prayer.
My hands clasped firmly together,
I thank God that you are there.
With daily troubles in and out,
Your arms are like an overcoat I wear.

With my eyes closed and my head bowed,
I thank God he put you here.
And with all my heart I say to him,
"Thank you, Lord, for to me he is very dear."

My fingers begin to loosen,
My eyes still tightly closed,
My head has slightly lifted,
As I say just one last thing.

I say, "Lord, before I go to sleep,
And wake up to the heaven's above,
I just wanted to tell you,
Lord, thank you for sending me love!"                    

[Chaos]

Love and betryal..........


  At night I sit and watch the stars,
in hopes of knowing who you are.
  I search deep inside my soul,
but I suppose I'll never know.
  In the beginning you gave me light,
now all we ever do is fight.
  I used to believe our love was true,
now I think my eyes are permanently black and blue.
  People said we would never end,
and although you are gone, you'll be back again.
  What do I do when you come home,
do I take you in –or let you go?
  I used to be strong enough to say good-bye.
The pain I feel now makes me want to try.
  I loved you so much that I couldn't let go,
but there are so many things you'll never know.
  Like the way I feel when you get mad,
or the cuts and bruises that hurt so bad.
  I've reached out for help, and no one is there,
sometimes I wonder if anyone cares.
  I try to hide what the mirror sees,
and friends can't always see through me.
  I made it pretty far,
acting as if I know who you are.
  I thought the pain would never end,
so I began my last descent.
  Believe it or not, this much is true,
it hurt less than to be with you.
  Now I sit and look down at the stars,
and I still wonder who you are.                    

[Chaos]

From the First time i met You..........

From the first time I met you,    
I knew my dreams would come true
if it was just me and you.

When the first time we kissed I knew it was you
because I never felt this feeling inside
until I met you.

People said we wouldn't make it,
then the next thing I knew
you told me you love me so.

You come into my dreams at night
and I can't get you out of my mind.
I think about you all of the time.

Right now I am just realizing
how much I love you
and want to be with you.

Months have gone by
and we are still going strong
and I feel that you are the one.
 
You are the most perfect person
I have ever known and I hope you know
I will always love you so.

You inspire me and help my hopes and dreams come true.
You always know what to say or do
when I am feeling blue.

We have a lot of obstacles to overcome together,
in the future.  When it is all over and done,
I hope you'll say I am the one.

People have tried to interfere with what we have.
But when it was all over and done I thought to myself...
"If we made it though this
then I know you are the one."

You are so understanding and independent, you do your own thing.
You don't care what other people say or think.
You set goals, aim high and you always know the right thing to do.
I am so proud of you.

Now you're off to college
I trust you not to leave me behind
in the search for your future
that you will soon find.                    

[Chaos]

Breaking Up..

Chewed up
Spit out
This is how I feel
Someone please pinch me
so I can tell if this is real

My eyes are like deserts,
bare and dry
Till I think just one thought of him
and I begin to cry

I guess it's better off this way...
me and him apart
but when I think of who he'll love next
my eyes get cold and dark

Deep down I feel my heart breaking-
When will this pain end?
Till the day he comes back to me
and we're in love again                    

[Chaos]

trust me....i have a lot of time on my hands to come up with these things.......i hope they aint all bad......                    

[Luce]

this is a song i wrote called.....PRE-FIX

Do you want to choose everything
And discard it when you're gone
When you lose everything
You blame ity on GOD

Touch the face of your dreams
And know that you'll be gone
From one into another
Screams until you're gone

Too bad you cant remember
What i say to you now
When i teach you to remember
You always forget somehow
When you're sus's light dies
And back
To corners shadows creep
You'll find that only half your life
You've ever lived
And thats when you wrer asleep

Don't turn away from day
That's the only time you'll see me
Don't forget times of yesterday
You might die in your dreams

Don't try to run
Don't try to hide
Don't push it away
Don't f* it away
No time to scorn
Cause it was already born

Don't let the things you hate come into your head
Cause what you dont want before your gate you'll find beneath your bed!