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[Chaos]

They have stripped him of his clothing
Under the scourge of man He has fallen
None appears to help him with that cross...
A thousand suns have burnt his sight out
A thousand corbeaux cannabalised him
Gouged his exposed side
The master of pain
Cut down
Once tall and stately, proud like palmiste
Now aging fast from green through brown and yellow
To weather beaten brittle dead bome white...
A million eons of selective creativity-of species:
Man sees naught but footing for his fence post...
Anaparima forgive them, they know not what they do
Erect phallus enshrine
The promise
Of life to come and coming
The threat of death
In all Destruction
Blind now in pain and anger
Anaparima,
Protect the innocent. children and the fools-
Trinity in man
Meditate on his behalf,
Anaparima,
In the council of the Gods.                    

[Chaos]

just tryin a ting there..................                    

[androsovic]

i realise you talking about christ and thing but where a phallus come in that? interpretation please                    

[Imperial_X]

He said he was trying something.  Let him be.                    

[Anonymous]

Seriously too much big words for me.                    

[perfectdrug]

i think it's decent that you know about that...
...keep it up...                    

[Imperial_X]

Freestyle thread coming soon.  Be ready.  I feel the vibe coming on.  Or is it just rain?  Never mind that.....                    

[Fault]

I think it's rain....                    

[Imperial_X]

{F.E.A.R.} Rain perhaps.                    

[The_Dark_Goddess]

will you people stop spamming meh mc thread?

please!!!!

someone put some decent writing up, will you?                    

[Osiris]

umm since when is it ur thred this is a PUBLIC forum u just created the thred but it really belongs to the members........                    

[Chaos]

True that....since when can someone lay claim to a thread?? i understand that what u started the thread for Dark Goddess but if people want to spam...that is kind of hard to stop.....                    

[The_Dark_Goddess]

steups.
is it too much to ask that you just put up what was meant to be placed in this thread?
is it?

osiris, i know where you sleep at night. Beware.                    

[Aka_Neo]

Allyuh read this story

Twas the night before Christmas, and all through the land
Not a person was sleepy, not even the weed man
The .38 millimeter was loaded with care
In hopes that St. Nicholas would soon be here

Out on the front there arose such a clatter
I ran with the gun to see what was the matter
Away to the window, I flew like a flash
This bandit would get hot lead in his @$$!
I opened the back door and went outside
I crept behind a water tank to hide.
What I saw brought fear to my heart.
There were eight flying ramgoats, and an old cart
When I saw the driver, I said "Oh $h!+!
That sonuvab***h must be St. Nick!"


More rapid than eagles the ramgoats came
And he whistled, and cussed, and called them by name:
"Now, Spranger! now, Smoker! now Itchin' and Scratchin'!
On, Beppin' ! on, Cloutin'! on Bitchin' and Naggin'!
To the top of the roof! So much presents to tote!
And all of a sudden I feelin' for a smoke!"
The arrival of Santa was a great dream to me.
I looked up and shouted, "Aye! What de scene?"
Santa said, "There's no chimney. I'm all out of luck!"
I said, " This is Trinidad, you stupid f***!
Yuh ramgoats better not shit on my roof!"
Santa jumped down, and fell with a loud BOOF!

When I saw his face, I nearly got a heart attack.
The rumours were right. Santa Claus is BLACK!!!
He was dressed in all mink, from head to feet.
There was gold, silver AND platinum in his teeth.
He really looked like a pimp for so
'Cause he was only saying " HO, HO, HO!"
A bundle of presents he had flung on his back
He looked like a Boboshanti selling nuts in a pack

His cheeks were puffy, his eyes were red.
The man had a big afro on his head!
He had a bullfrog face and a big pot belly
And he had a silver chain ------- an imitation "NELLY".
I said, " If this is really Santa Claus here,
Then tell me all the things I wanted LAST YEAR!"
Santa skinned up his face and said , " Let's see,
You wanted clothes, a mansion, cars and money,
Shoes, a job, a gyul, an XBOX with games,
A pool, a big stereo and some platinum chains
And finally, just to sound "Christmasy"
A partridge in a pear tree, whatever that be."

"You forgot my gifts!" ,I shouted, "You had to be crazy!"
"I was gonna bring them", he said, "but I was feelin' lazy!
Anyways, I heard Trinidad have the best ganja.
So give a little sample to jolly old Santa!"
I gave him "a sample", nicely rolled in brown
I told him, "This is the best SMOKE in town"
"As the natives say", said Santa, "gimme the light!"
I lit the fuse-----------this would f*** him up right!
"What's the name of this?", said Santa, "I got to have some!"
"This", said I, "is what the natives call A SCRATCHBOMB!!"

The explosion startled the dotish old elf
I pulled out the gun and said, "Go f*** yuhself!"
I shot him in the feet, and called out my peeps.
With cutlasses, we planassed him in the street
Even the weed man, with happy refrain,
Shouted happily, "I sprang Santa chain!!"

To finish the job, and feeling real dread,
We stretched his boxers right over his head.
We reached for his sack, our hearts filled with glee
We'll be the richest n!g@$$ in the country!!
My peeps came back with a coalpot, and say:
"We eating flying ramgoat on Christmas Day! Yay!!"
And then we all shouted, as Santa ran into the night:
"Merry Christmas to you. Now get the f*** out meh sight!!"                    

[Anonymous]

Nuff bout spam, jus put some good ole poems up nah
I doh wah see no bickering.

My dreams, My thoughts,
Look into my eyes and tell me I’m not,
The things that go through my head,
Making my cringe in fear and dread,
The tears I have never shed.

Of the things you know about me,
Of the way I act, of what you see,
Tell me what u think, tell it truthfully,
I jus want to know
To better understand why I hurt so
The pain I feel, what can it be,
Nothing hurts more than the truth indeed,
But living not knowing leaves you confused,
Leaves you wondering what if it was true.

My heart needs rekindling,
To light up my soul,
By a burning fire so strong and fierce,
To destroy that dark pit within my soul,
Can’t anyone answer me, Can’t none help me,
Is that so much to ask,
Please love me.                    

[The_Dark_Goddess]

Nuff bout spam, jus put some good ole poems up nah
I doh wah see no bickering.

My dreams, My thoughts,
Look into my eyes and tell me I’m not,
The things that go through my head,
Making my cringe in fear and dread,
The tears I have never shed.

Of the things you know about me,
Of the way I act, of what you see,
Tell me what u think, tell it truthfully,
I jus want to know
To better understand why I hurt so
The pain I feel, what can it be,
Nothing hurts more than the truth indeed,
But living not knowing leaves you confused,
Leaves you wondering what if it was true.

My heart needs rekindling,
To light up my soul,
By a burning fire so strong and fierce,
To destroy that dark pit within my soul,
Can’t anyone answer me, Can’t none help me,
Is that so much to ask,
Please love me.

my saviour! yay!

*tears of joy*                    

[Aka_Neo]

it could but it cya come around my story                    

[The_Dark_Goddess]

it could but it cya come around my story

your story was an email i got some time ago                    

[Fault]

Feeling in a bottle

I'm lonely just like I've always been.
I meet you, we talk, I mean really talk.
I see something in you I like and maybe...
Maybe you've seen a something in me?

I don't know, I'm not sure,
So when I see you I just smile.
Wishing I would do something more all the while,
Totally enticed by you, your allure.

I want so much to say how I feel,
I say it, but In tedious, ambiguos ways,
I can't seem to just let you know plain as day.
Being rejected would hurt too much, so No Way!.

And even so I don't know you very well,
You might say I'm coming on too strong to fast.
I want to do it in a way that our relationship can still last,
Maybe I'll keep being vague and someday you'll tell...

By me                    

[Chaos]

Way boy .......yuh could ah come better than that Aka_neo......