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Offline Imperial_X

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« Reply #140 on: December 15, 2003, 06:49:40 PM »
Ouchie.                    
Consciousness yearn to kill
To re-affirm the will,
Zealous I burn the drill
Forging, I mould the skill.

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« Reply #140 on: December 15, 2003, 06:49:40 PM »

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« Reply #141 on: December 15, 2003, 06:54:22 PM »
Ouchie ?? You need a band aid mr imperial ??                    

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« Reply #142 on: December 15, 2003, 06:59:40 PM »
I need some stitches and a body cast if that's what you mean.                    
Consciousness yearn to kill
To re-affirm the will,
Zealous I burn the drill
Forging, I mould the skill.

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« Reply #143 on: December 15, 2003, 08:22:46 PM »
As the sky is gray
And the sun shines still
There won't be peace
Because with peace comes war
And with war comes peace
But we never seem to care

How do we fight our enemies
Having so much trouble fighting ourselves?
*The strong hurt the weak
And the weak hurt those even weaker than themselves...*
Will the madness stop?
No, not as long as we think less of people...
We have wars of race and colour
I don't see why
Perhaps it is better to be colour-blind...

How do we serve God
if we commit so many sins against him?
Most don't mean to, but some do...
Discrimination, Cults, War, Exploitation
These things shall never leave us
For no one tries to stop
So I leave that to you
As I do my part...

"The strong hurt the weak
And the weak hurt those even weaker than themselves...", quote from Chrono Cross

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I don't really like the last paragraph that much anymore, but thas my poem                    

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« Reply #144 on: December 15, 2003, 08:30:06 PM »
Nice one dere boy polios i remember in form 2 when u started writing poetry i was like wtf this man have some talent.........                    

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« Reply #144 on: December 15, 2003, 08:30:06 PM »

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« Reply #145 on: December 15, 2003, 09:35:57 PM »
Osiris dat was cool strange but cool.
I will think of some and post them here but ot will take time as don't normally write poems LOL.                    

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« Reply #146 on: December 15, 2003, 09:53:51 PM »
thx osiris, oh yea, you were there when it started, all cuz of REX's dream

here's one more:
Ignorance-
by Kishan Solomon

No he's wrong,
It can't be true,
but it makes sense,
I guess I'm wrong.
 
No you're right,
we can justify our points,
we'll win this argument,
we are right,

What is going on?
What am I saying?
You did this,
Who are you?

I am you,
I'm here for you,
I am your strength,
Your determination.

You are my ignorance,
My anger,
Stop making me argue,
Stop hurting my friend.

There a part of you,
who always wanted this
Look at his face,
I think he wants to cry.

Leave him be,
I won't let you take over,
I will fight you,
You will die.

You are fighting yourself,
Just give up,
What are you doing?
You may be rid of me now,
but I will never die,
I'll be inside of you.
 
I'm am finally free,
But he is still there,
"I'm sorry," I said,
"I don't know what came over me."
In truth,
I do.                    

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« Reply #147 on: December 15, 2003, 10:50:22 PM »
kudos to all!!
i've read it and i havnt seen something i dont like yet!
you people have some serious talent!

(even andro, regardless of the fact that he just assassinate me :P) :lol:
it was good though
kill me all you want, just do it in good writing!                    

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« Reply #148 on: December 16, 2003, 11:13:20 AM »
Black rotting blood invades my ailing flesh,
Destroys and burns me down alive,
Ulcerated lips stinking of death,
Excommunicated creators of mine,
Blasphemous words and eyes that bleed,
In horrible never ending torments,
Waiting for hell my dead body looks ahead,
That will be soon the end.
Prepare you to die,
That comes unexpectedly,
Ask nobody "why?",
It's just an inevitable thing.
Still existing mind being in deadly fear,
Soon will be only heap of musty rot,
Tongue, heart and all my guts shall be digested by the necrophagic grubs.
No hope I must die and turn to ashen dust,
My soul will fly away to realms of dead,
Absurd resistance, I feel, Darkness takes my soul,
I'm only, after all, the slave of hell.
Raise from this grave,
Is fear in your eyes?
You have to leave your flesh,
Still wait for you - decapitated saints.
I've died to live in everlasting world,
Where reigns death and holy law of hate,
Omnipotent lords feeding the groans,
Of turn souls imploring for mercy,
I'm, in the place, where sin is all around,
And blood flows from every clipped head,
A billion dirty souls decay in ones own blood,
Awaiting beneficial touch of force, that let 'em die!
I'm raising up above eternal mists,
Heavens lie at feet of mine,
Wandering the sky I see transformed Christ,
Whose head I'm holding in my hand.
Is it possible the heaven is the hell?
Perhaps it's my own terrible dream,
Clipped sacred heads seem to say to me,
"That's true, the sky has turned to fire!"



also written in form 2 also untitled                    

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« Reply #149 on: December 16, 2003, 11:56:01 AM »
Gah, all my old work is now defined as angsty and confused :(

I need to write some new stuff and finish my Evanguard manga. I will make you all BOW when I am done :D                    

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« Reply #150 on: December 16, 2003, 08:23:01 PM »
hmmm my work are based on all kinda mess going on in meh life
nothing more nothing less
i do have one
non relating poem
if i can find it off
poetry.com
i will post it here                    

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« Reply #151 on: December 16, 2003, 11:05:38 PM »
here's one of mine

Fire
-Kishan Solomon

Fire the great deceiver,
It brings hope,
It brings light,
You decide to cope,
You turn your back on the night,
Gently it kindles,
Oh you trust it so,
It draws you closer,
It sees you clearly,
You finally give in,
Those flames of fury,
You join your forgotten kin,
You follow the light,
To the eternal shadow,
Oh the irony.
There's no tomorrow,
I share not,
In this twisted sorrow.

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« Reply #152 on: December 16, 2003, 11:23:19 PM »
this is one of my longer ones .........


Warriors with hate inflict destruction
Comes true the awful prediction
Still alive corpses lie in the street
Spitting the blood to the God
Dying in flames dammed mob
Screaming with pain: _This can't be, oh God"
Maybe they will understand he was never
But will be too late, so die forever

Circling in the sky the demons now descend
To raise their slaughter of mankind till its end
The final massacre of people on the earth
Pain cracks their minds, everywhere is Death

False Gods in their temples tremble with fear
They know the death is now so near
Unearthly Armageddon burns with flames of doom
Poisoned seed flung into virgin's womb

Circling in the sky the demons now descend
To raise their slaughter of mankind till its end
The final massacre of people on the earth
Pain cracks their minds, everywhere is Death

Merciless angels fly overheads
It's no time for your imploring pleads
Commit suicide with horror in your eyes
Bleeding with scars, pride world now dies

Warriors with hate inflict destruction
Comes true the awful prediction
Still alive corpses lie in the street
Spitting the blood to the God
Dying in flames dammed mob
Screaming with pain: "This can't be, oh God"
Maybe they will understand he was never
But will be too late, so die forever

Different Armageddon came true under our eyes
Dust comes down when the time came for sunrise
The final massacre, winds destroy the earth
Impaled heads notify, that winner is the Death                    

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« Reply #153 on: December 16, 2003, 11:24:23 PM »
well actually that was my last............also untitled                    

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« Reply #154 on: December 17, 2003, 12:11:35 AM »
i ent been here for more than a day and look at stuff appear!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Keep it up ppl, nice work                    

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« Reply #155 on: December 17, 2003, 12:24:21 AM »
Quote
i ent been here for more than a day and look at stuff appear!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Keep it up ppl, nice work



ent??? i swear!!!
well say what, i started this phenomena so i proud, lol.
when it reach plenty more, like 20pgs or so, i'll break out the champagne.                    

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« Reply #156 on: December 17, 2003, 12:27:26 AM »
great work osiris
it's a bit on the evil side, lol
but it's original, you should write more
maybe now it'd be happier, not that it needs to be
good work                    

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« Reply #157 on: December 17, 2003, 12:33:57 AM »
Yea u notice the new stuff real ppl postin kinda evil.........
Where all the poems with flowers and sunshine and singing in the hills................                    

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« Reply #158 on: December 17, 2003, 12:47:30 AM »
*ahem*

i like flowers
and i like hills
but i dont like dresses
with little pink frills.
sunshine is pretty
there's no doubt in my mind
but sunburn is bad
and good sunblock, hard to find.

hows that for flowers and sunshine? :lol:                    

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« Reply #159 on: December 17, 2003, 12:59:31 AM »
i cyah let DG out do meh so, and u make meh come up wit this wen my head feelin real tired.

Flowers all over the place,
In the trees,
On the ground.
In the gardens all full of life,
With sun shining and birds singing,
An atmosphere of tranquility,
Where a mind can rest at ease,
This i will call my Garden of Peace                    

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« Reply #159 on: December 17, 2003, 12:59:31 AM »

 


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