Another piece

[thrillseeker]

i did this one is history of graphic design class ...yes d teacher was dat boring!!!!!!!

                   

[ShinSagat]

Just curious but what is your style ? is it like simple with dread text or around a logo cuz i like it but yuh shoulda use a more retro background                    

[thrillseeker]

oh ok kool ..Shin
...nah i have different patterns in it
i just was playing up with it a little trying to get the hang of this thing here
we ain't start it in school yet but if i have some experience b4 we learn better 4 me                    

[Mugsy]

not bad nut the retro background aint cuttin wit the plain colour at the bottom                    

[Frozen]

That is kinda lame to be honest..too plain                    

[New Era Outlaw]

I'm sorry.
As is, that pic just looks like a random mish-mash of Photoshop tools, without direction or inspiration. I understand that you did this while you were bored, but still. I think you should have put this in the Junk Art thread to show that it's not really a finished piece, just some work that you just happened to conjure up in class, instead of giving this its own thread.

Once again, I'm sorry.                    

[ShinSagat]

I say toss that kinda ting in d junk art thread so that yuh could at least get advice on how to make it better                    

[thrillseeker]

okay nah u critics i didn't know and i doh need much guidance right now...thats y i doing graphics design as meh major..ppl doh born with experience yuh know...except maybe in crying....and no offence taken anywayz....                    

[Frozen]

well u shud post more of ur later work to see how u improve...u can ask some feedback from us "critics"                    

[Shogun]

Fellas if yuh really going to critic someones work the least you can do is be specific in your criticisms.

Thrillseeker, the first thing that i noticed with your peice was that i could not read the text properly. The distortions and the effects were a bit too much. remember that if your are putting text that is meant to be read then you should be able to read it easily.

by the way, i like the spawn eyes i wonder if anyone else noticed them.
                     

[Frozen]

They're not spawn eyes..they are archon eyes
To tell u the problem with the pic...nothing blends...at all
I find the colors dont match and when u added the archon eyes make them look like a part of the pic not like if they were added from elsewhere(You can see the box outline of it)