The Poetry Thread.........

[perfectdrug]

...i asked a simple question jed...
...can u be mature and answer it...
...i not spamming...
...i simply askin you somethin about 'YOUR' poetry...                    

[Aka_Neo]

well i am very sorry for saying that and most of my poems came from a specific source if u really dont mind                    

[Aka_Neo]

SHE COMES TO ME WHEN NIGHT FALLS
WHEN ALL HAS COME TO REST.
SHE COMES TO ME IN MOONLIGHT
TO BE MY SPECIAL GUEST.

SHE COMES TO PASS THE LONELY NIGHT
SHE'S MINE TO SEE AND HEAR.
SHE COMES TO ME, AS ALWAYS,
IN DREAMS I HOLD SO DEAR.

EVERY NIGHT A DIFFERENT DREAM
OF WHAT I WISH COULD BE:
TWO PEOPLE, BATHED IN LOVE-
SHE IS ALL I LONG TO SEE.

THE DREAMS APPEAR SO VERY REAL,
SHE IS ALWAYS KIND AND SWEET.
COULD THEY BE A PREMONITION
OF THE DAY WHEN WE WILL MEET?

ALL I'M LEFT TO DO IS HOPE
FOR A LOVE THAT'S MEANT TO BE.
THIS I DO IN ALL MY DREAMS-
WHEN EACH NIGHT SHE COMES TO ME                    

[perfectdrug]

...specific source???
...i thought you wrote them???                    

[Aka_Neo]

Right now i not going to lower my iq over some poetry if u think i didnt write it i didnt write it if u think i wrote well u think i wrote cuz i not wasting my time on this..                    

[Polios]

Right now i not going to lower my iq over some poetry if u think i didnt write it i didnt write it if u think i wrote well u think i wrote cuz i not wasting my time on this..

dude, no offence, but you just did waste your time on it                    

[KajunKid]

A year ago a vow was made,
To end this foolish masquarade
Quite simply put to confess ,
My feelings while i'm at my best
Happy ,sad, confused or lost
Dont matter what i'll pay the cost
For this is somthing i must do ,
I must confess my love for you
That day you walked into my class
A spell on me u then , did cast
An infatuation i couldnt tell
A crush , now does that ring a bell?
And this day i shall call the last
Being the one that marks the end of our past
For after today we may never meet
Making it perfect for this daring feat
An angel , that is how  i see you
Aweet caring and hard working too
An inspiration to run a mile
Your beauty surpassed only by your smile                    

[KajunKid]

that was a personal composition , it tell the story of a boy in love with a girl he meets.... but the boy hasnt the scrote to do anything bout it                    

[perfectdrug]

^^^nice original poem kajun...
...two thumbs up...
...and a big toe...                    

[Polios]

great poem, good depiction                    

[New Era Outlaw]

Excellent work, Kajun.
I believe that the best forms of poetry are those that are written from the heart. If your heart, your very SOUL is inserted into a poem, there is meaningfulness behind it, and what it results in is creativity in its finest, personally crafted to your perfection.

On a side note, Kajun, I'm on the assumption that by personal you mean that you wrote that for somebody you like. Have you tried showing her this prose yet?
Girls like fellas with an appreciation of the arts, you know...                    

[perfectdrug]

^^^thats what i told him...
...but does he listen to me...
...nooooooooooooo...