The Poetry Thread.........

[Aka_Neo]

I never lost as much but twice,
And that was in the sod.
Twice have I stood a beggar
Before the door of God!

Angels, twice descending,
Reimbursed my store.
Burglar, banker, father,
I am poor once more!                    

[Aka_Neo]

I held a jewel in my fingers
And went to sleep
The day was warm, and winds were prosy
I said, "Twill keep"

I woke - and chide my honest fingers,
The Gem was gone
And now, an Amethyst remembrance
Is all I own                    

[Luce]

voice of heart...i like.                    

[Bong53]

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Swear
copyright 2004 Colby Stratton
 
Sweet girl, when will you see
When will you know?
That thing you call a man is nothing more than show.
What will you do?
What will you say?
When he crushes your heart like the one he did just yesterday.
Your heart soft, your eyes afire.
What would you say the charms of a man waiting to take you higher?
Take down your walls, let down your guard
Put away your weapons, don't let your heart be hard
When times get tough and clouds of anger loom ahead
When you've been hurt and you feel unpretty
You feel all is lost and you've lost the strength to go on
I will show you the love you've been denied,
Like the redbud that blooms in the spring,
Will be your heart when met with my love
When all has lost and the world is at an end,
When the stars are burnt out and night is gone,
When the warmth of the sun has turned a cold shoulder,
I'll be there
I'll never leave you,
I swear.
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[Bong53]

I held a jewel in my fingers
And went to sleep  
The day was warm, and winds were prosy
I said, \"Twill keep\"  

I woke - and chide my honest fingers,  
The Gem was gone
And now, an Amethyst remembrance
Is all I own

well made...it can be hard to make something like that, short, sweet and fairly simple, yet not overly simple. I like it alot, keep up the good work.

Also I will be back to edit the Pheonixes clan lore/poetry. It is late tonight and I have to get to bed. Thanks you guys!                    

[Anonymous]

I am tweety
I'm so pretty
I'm looking for my kitty
his name is sylvester
not chester

I'm small
like a doll
so make sure I dont fall
when we go to the mall

if u dont like me screw u
your just a pile of doo doo
and that means YOU!                    

[Chaos]

I bring you the last rose, my love
The only rose to survive
this earthly discourse
A rose of character
and mysticism
Fragrant in the most
desirable of ways
Engendering love's attention
Passion's ultimate persuasion
Color, red, so deep
that it penetrates
To your very soul
Imparting color and
texture
To your life, renewed
A rose so perfect,
it is imperfect
Scarred by life's tragedies
Bruised by mistakes
and misadventures
Yet surviving, in all
its mystical beauty
A gift of life's innermost
secrets
A gift to you, my love
The last rose                    

[Chaos]

Moving in the silence,
stirring up the embers
of passion's heated touch
is a shadow; I remember
as it fell across my heart.

A sweet and loving feeling
that taught me to be open
and gave my spirit lightness
to greet each brilliant dawn.

The glory of the passion,
the sweetness of the touching,
what comfort in those arms
wrapped so warm around me
as sleep would find our hearts.

Still lingering in the twilight
as new as when we met,
with laughter overflowing
into everything we did
is that tender shadow....love.                    

[Chaos]

Outside, the rainfall hopelessly
spreads your aroma.  
Everything smells of you tonight!  
Love, everything smells of you!
 
I love the perfume of your body,  
because it is made with essences  
concentrated of your soul.  
I love the scent of your body  
in the morning, in the afternoon and in the night.
 
I love your sweaty body-  
of a hard-working and good woman.  
I love the perspiration of your body with savor and salt.  
I love the aroma of an in-love woman  
because it has the chemistry  
that ties our destinies forever.
 
Do you know?  
In our home everything smells of you:  
The hidden corners of the home  
they keep your aroma,  
our room in dimness, in days like this,  
intensifies your fragrance;  

the pillow that every night dances  
with the uncombed curls of your lovely hair,  
and, of course, our bed!
Faithful witness to our nights of love  
and, also, of sadness and crying.
 
In our house everything smells of you-
although you are not!  
Everything smells me of you, tonight,  
darling, everything smells me of you!                    

[Chaos]

Consider this small dust, here in the glass,
By atoms moved:
Could you believe that this the body was
Of one that loved;
And in his mistress' flame playing like a fly,
Was turned to cinders by her eye:
Yes; and in death, as life unblessed,
To have it expressed,
Even ashes of lovers find no rest                    

[Anonymous]

I am tweety
I'm so pretty
I'm looking for my kitty
his name is sylvester
not chester

I'm small
like a doll
so make sure I dont fall
when we go to the mall

if u dont like me screw u
your just a pile of doo doo
and that means YOU!

boss of a poem tweets                    

[Imperial_X]

That settles it.

TWEETY is a friggin BOSS!!!!

Chaos, have you ever given any thought as to limiting the number of poems you submit.  Its fine to see that you can come up with so many but you really should take it down a notch because

1)  You will greatly overshadow other poets out there

2)  You will overshadow yourself by making anything you write seem less special.

From the previous "Writers anyone" to here its the same thing.  You really don't have to rape the thread that badly.                    

[Anonymous]

of course imperial

I am a boss
at no extra cost
cuz i use MS DOS                    

[Evangelion_01]

Well the Chaos man is talented and has some time on his hands but take the amount of submissions down a bit if you value your work man. Take it easy becuase I'd hate to see writing like yours slip into a background perspective...Not that we don't like your work man, for me-I admire it greatly-but as Imperial said: Take it down a bit. You don't want your work becomming a backgrounder.                    

[Bong53]

I would agree to the point of not submitting crappy stuff, but it has been good so far. The internet is a great place to become known, I say go for it! Myself if I had more time, I would be "raping" the thread too! Keep it up Chaos, watch out though, I just might have to show you up!                    

[The_Dark_Goddess]

*brief post*
i have to agree on everything being said about chaos here, he has extreme talent and as much as i love reading it online here i think it deserves a better and broader showcase. What you write here is excellent work, Chaos, but perhaps you should limit just how much you share with the rest of us.                    

[Anonymous]

Thats exactly what i did, i limited my work, so one post a day at most or evry other day. Cause i seriously cyah handle overwhelming stuff, i jus doh bother reading, and thats what happened in the writers anyone thread after awhile, too much stuff at one time, i jus got put off. i have to  admit u do have good poems. Jus take it easy.                    

[QDizzle]

of course imperial  

I am a boss  
at no extra cost  
cuz i use MS DOS

HOSS LOOK THE TROPHY AND THE PRIZE MONEY ALL IS YOURS HOSS ALL IS YOURS LOL WE WHA MORE WE WHA MORE

MORE TWEETY MORRE                    

[Chaos]

That settles it.

TWEETY is a friggin BOSS!!!!

Chaos, have you ever given any thought as to limiting the number of poems you submit.  Its fine to see that you can come up with so many but you really should take it down a notch because

1)  You will greatly overshadow other poets out there  

2)  You will overshadow yourself by making anything you write seem less special.

From the previous \"Writers anyone\" to here its the same thing.  You really don't have to rape the thread that badly.

Thanks for the advice....i was really thinkin about easing off for a while....i apologise if i seem to be taking over but i just have a thing for poetry and sometimes i can't help it. I'll leave it alone for a while.                    

[demented]

boy chaos doh study dem boy if yuh have talent show it dey jus jealous they eh have lyrics and dey trying to keep yuh down.but dey cant keep d general down boy..fire fih dem jus blaze jed..lata