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« Reply #80 on: February 20, 2004, 10:43:10 AM »
Haiku about preparing to paint-
stage 3- later that morning...
(by setsuko and sister, aneko)

I prepare my ink,
I admire my paper,
I clean my brushes...                    
choose your words as if your very life depended on them pleasing me- hajime saitoh

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« Reply #81 on: February 20, 2004, 10:46:56 AM »
Haiku about preparing to paint-
stage 4- lunchtime that day- the moment of truth...
(by setsuko and sister, Aneko)

I am prepared now,
but my mind is empty and,
I am too hungry.                    
choose your words as if your very life depended on them pleasing me- hajime saitoh

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« Reply #82 on: February 20, 2004, 10:49:19 AM »
to be continued....                    
choose your words as if your very life depended on them pleasing me- hajime saitoh

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« Reply #83 on: February 20, 2004, 11:16:49 AM »
um

tweety is yellow
like your fellow
she was gone
but now has been found

tweety got Arc Angel pissed
but he is still on my contact list
but neb is an a$$
he feel he is all of that
but he is just full of gas

some love tweety
others dont
but tweety dont care
cause she has no fear
so dont come near
cause tweety go cap one in your ear                    

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« Reply #84 on: February 20, 2004, 12:44:50 PM »
I had dinner with my sweetie
At his home the other night
I knew he’d make a special treat
At least I hoped he might

He set out all the crockery fine
With his best linen pressed
Silver knives and forks and spoons
I really was impressed

I said “What’s for dinner sweetie?”
He flashed a cheeky smile
And replied “I know you’ll love it
It’ll be ready in just a while”

Well I got a little suspicious
For I noticed that no smell
Was coming from his kitchen
And no food was there as well

Nothing cooking on the stove
So sign of chook nor fish
And he knew spaghetti marinara
Was my favourite dish

The stereo played slow love songs
The candles were aglow
He certainly was cooking something up
But what? I did not know

As he led me away from the kitchen
My hopes began to crumble
When he took me to the main bedroom
I heard my tummy rumble

He set me down upon the bed
And then to my surprise
He grabbed a blood red silken tie
And wrapped it round my eyes

I started feeling worried
This was not his normal behaviour
What could be for dinner here
And what could I find to savour?

I could hear him rustling round a bit
What was taking him so long
I’d known him over six months now
But could I have judged him wrong?

Did he have a darker side?
Was he into kinky stuff?
Well everything here seemed OK
I knew I just had to trust

Then I felt his hand so gentle
As he slowly released my blindfold
I opened my eyes and before me
Was such a sight to behold

He had totally turned his body
From his crown to his toenail tip
Into a savoury sensation
And in his hand... a packet of chips

Well, I could not hold back the laughter
I was rolling about in a fit
Then he held out the packet and said,
So solemn...”Would you like a dip?”

After removing the hair from the pate
To my delight it tasted divine
And he kept a supply of rice crackers
Propped up ‘tween his toes in a line

Well I tried the cream cheese on his fingers
His belly button olives were yum
But I kept coming back for my favourite
The guacamole smeared on his buns

He’d gone to a lot of trouble
To find all my favourite things
I especially liked the arrangement
Of the cheezles and burger rings

I shared all the treats with my sweetie
Towards the end I was starting to slow
He gave me a wink and suggested
I finish off with a big cheerio

Needless to say...
There were no further courses
We sent out for pizza instead
After sweetie had showered we ate it
Propped up in our crumb filled bed

Now our relationship’s taken on new meaning
As we share in our new found delight
In fact I’ve invited my sweetie
For dessert round at my place tonight                    
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« Reply #85 on: February 20, 2004, 01:07:40 PM »
Java is good with bourbon
Java is good with tea
Java is good with bubbly Chocolate
Java is good with me!

        YUM!

Java makes me happie!
Java makes me Hyper!
Java makes my baby poop in her DIAPER

      YUCK!

Java comes from beans
that grow on Trees
Java taste good
With Crixx and Cheese

       YUM!

Java is not yellow
Java is not blue
Java Loves me
And Loves You

      Yum!

Yes i love Java
As you can see
Now i drank too much
And i have to go PEE!

     MOVE OUT OF THE WAY!                    

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« Reply #86 on: February 20, 2004, 01:25:50 PM »
LMAO.                    
Consciousness yearn to kill
To re-affirm the will,
Zealous I burn the drill
Forging, I mould the skill.

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« Reply #87 on: February 24, 2004, 11:56:21 PM »
i posting a poem i made long time
i post it in the writer's thread before though

Where The Rivers Flow

There are lands thither
Over the mountains
Where plants don't wither
And there are rainbow fountains

I wish to see that place
But I may never go
No, not in my case
To where the rivers flow

That is where you are
So far away from here
Alas it is too far
But ne'er do I feel fear

I shall journey forward
And we shall meet
I am no coward
I shall keep my feet

Once more will I see you
Your smiling face aglow
And in return, I smile too
As the clear rivers flow

Then I shall hold your hand
And in a trance
We'll fly and never land
And leave it all to chance                    

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« Reply #88 on: February 25, 2004, 12:25:09 AM »
POINTY BIRDS ARE POINTY POINTY
THE POINTS ON THEIR HEADS ARE NOINTY NOINTY                    

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« Reply #89 on: February 25, 2004, 01:17:25 AM »
Ha! Stand back, mortals!
Let me show you some serious poetry!!
[ahem]

A horse is a horse, of course, of course,
And no one can talk to a horse of course
That is, of course, unless the horse is the famous Mister Ed.

Go right to the source and ask the horse
He’ll give you the answer that you’ll endorse.
He’s always on a steady course.
Talk to Mister Ed.

People yakkity yak a streak and waste your time of day
But Mr. Ed will never speak unless he has something to say

A horse is a horse, of course, of course,
And this one’ll talk ‘til his voice is hoarse.
You never heard of a talking horse?

Well listen to this: "I'm Mister Ed."



Thank yaw....thank yaw....

[backstage]
Mr. Ed: You did good out there, young 'un.
Me: Oh, put a sock in it. Where's my waffle?
Mr. Ed: [tosses him the waffle]
Me: Yay!  :)

Let this be a lesson to you all that a little shameless promotion never hurt nobody. And now, for your viewing pleasure, here is a picture of Mr. Ed on a surfboard.

                   

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« Reply #90 on: February 25, 2004, 09:16:11 AM »
Dew Drops
He walked on the dew dripped grass
Pondering numerous thoughts in his mind,
Then for some reason he looked up
and saw a figure of some kind.

He looked on through his curious eyes
His mind burning to know,
when the figure started to leave
and for some reason he shouted "Please dont go!"

The figure turned around and to his surprise
he was astonished at what he came across.
It was the most beautiful maiden he ever saw
and he looked on,his thoughts completely lost.

The words came from her mouth first.
She asked"Would you like to go for a walk?"
He came out of his trance and spoke at last
"I could'nt have asked for more"

They walked down the meadow together
then she stopped as they came across a well.
He looked into her eyes and asked why,
She said"There is something I have to tell"

"I'm afraid I must leave"she said
he replied"Why?I desire to stay with you the rest of my life."
She said"You see,in this well lives a dragon.
and I am the dragons wife."

He had heard of this dragon,
who feeds on broken hearts.
Bu as he pondered,she pushed him in the well
saying "We must part."

And as the dragon crushed his bones
and he desperately fought for his last breath,
he shouted to his betrayer above,
and said"I'm so glad we met!"

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Freedom

Sometimes its too dark to see myself within.
Its like living a dream,a dream that never ends.
Then I start running,running away from you.
From all of my memories,I dont know what to do!
But no matter how hard I try,I keep falling into the abyss.
And when I look up I keep seeing your face.I just cant take it!

Chorus:
All I want is freedom from your memory!
Leave me now and let me be.
I dont want you to come around me,
I just want freedom from your memory!

Then as soon as you came your gone into the night,
and I'm let all alone,a reflection of my life.
Why did you come?Why the hell did you go?
The answers to these questions I'll never be able to know.
And now you think I'm dead,my body cold in the dark.
But the pain kept me alive,so watch you f**king back!

Chorus x2

I try in vain,building in pain.
I cant hear what your saying,I'm going insane.
Insane through lust,death is a must,
buried in the dust but you never did trust
me because of my seemingly abnormaility
ending in catastrophy with my fatality.
So now your pride sets in,carry on with your life.
Forget all the fights of both of our lives.....

But just think.........what if I came back?  
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Far from here

What am I feeling for you?
I cant explain why I do what I do.
I'm at a lost and I dont know where to turn.
Why dont you take me..take me as your own?

Chorus:
I just want you to be here with me.
Just you and I for all eternity.
I promise to show you all my care,
if you just take my heart far,far from here.

And when your close I watch how you smile.
When you laugh,my heart goes wild.
I wanna say what I'm trying to hide.
It's tearing me apart,killing me inside.

Chorus

Then I look at you...your eyes meet mine.
My lips ease open but it's the words I dont find.
I'm explodeing within but my chance is wasted.
I came so close.........why did'nt I say it?

Chorusx2

Ending:Female voice-"Why does'nt he see how much he means to me?"
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These are just three of my poems/songs.I hope you liked reading them.                    

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« Reply #91 on: February 26, 2004, 07:09:45 PM »
no i did not like reading them lol
j/k eh pyro so doh beat meh up


A Journey of Retrospect
- Kishan Solomon


Remembering my past,
Watching your eyes,
Just make it last,
The Flood dies.

The true black sky,
My shadows cast,
I'm living a lie,
Where's my contrast?

I see it all,
Creatures of the night,
I hear the call,
It's time to fight.

Lost in thought,
I must go back,
I got caught,
To fain my lack.

The Flood returns,
Watching twinkling from afar,
of Forgotten Stars.
Echoes of whispered words,
of Forgotten Worlds.
Outline of a personified key,
of a Forgotten me.


Copyright of Polios Productions
yea i know it short, and it doesn't when i read it back, at least not as much as i wanted it to
anyway, i don't change those things                    

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« Reply #92 on: February 27, 2004, 02:28:46 PM »
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no i did not like reading them lol
j/k eh pyro so doh beat meh up


Ahhhhh......damn critics!lol.No scene Polios.I just write it.What you all wanna think of it is up to you.After all I cant control your mind right...........or can I? :P                    

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« Reply #93 on: February 27, 2004, 02:32:45 PM »
Empathy


Vampire.
Ghastly beauty in your silken skin, your tomb-stone pallor
Ringlets of death about your ashen face
Eyes burning with unearthly fire
Your lust for life.
Rise from your grave to follow the call
Blood-lines engraved in your heart
Yield to a moment of desperate hate
To fulfil your love.


I have seen you many nights
Wandering alone in the moonlit streets
Following some scent
Of which I am unaware.
How often have I longed to join you?
How many times have I prayed to you to see me?
Your face is etched in my mind –
My eyes behold you wherever I look


I see your pain
The force that traps you
And I long to release you
Knowing that beauty and death are so close
Slender threads woven into the fabric of my dreams
Will you ever see me?
My vampire love
Will you ever come to me?
Let me share your life, your pain, your love...
We will survive somehow.


By day I sit on your grave-stone
Hoping that you'll hear the words I whisper
In your silent, weeping sleep.
My tears are the blood to resurrect you.
As by night I yearn for your perfection
And you rise again to walk alone
I wonder: will you ever need me?
Ever hear me?
Ever want me?


White-faced and solemn you creep through the streets
Preying on the miserable and alone
Feeding your own pain with the pain of others
Your victims cause you to suffer
More than you do them.
Rather take me – for I can cure you
Rather take me – for I can love you
Rather take me – for I can let you live again
And this eternity may be ours together
If you only come tonight...


Hold my hand and we are invincible
Life and death unite us in the marriage of ages
We are indivisible, indestructible.
Perhaps tonight you will understand.
You may stray beneath my window again
You may perchance look up and see me this time
And perhaps you will realise how I feel


My life is worthless without you
And the mortal world is a tiny place
Compared to your immortal universe
While I sit and dream
Of sublime pleasures to come
And thoughts of you haunt my mind
I will pray that one day soon
You will understand my love
You will understand my words
And all my thoughts will become yours
Once, for all, for ever
My vampire love...                    


I know your pain, let me make it ......worse.
I know your fears, let me become them.
I know you  dreams, let me haunt them.
Let me make u SCREAM.

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« Reply #94 on: February 27, 2004, 02:51:52 PM »
I am a duck
despite what you think,
I don't go cluck.

I'm not the bad guy,
even though I'm black.
my beak and feet are yellow
quack, quack, quack.

I had 3 movies named after me,
about ducks that were mighty.
I still get hunted
but that's alrighty.

Because soon I'll be doing the hunting
and that's no joke.
You'll have to stick your hands in the air
when you feel my 12 gauge double barrel sawed off shotgun poke.

You can get pistol-whipped
or just plain shot.
Or i can let tweety do you in,
I know what she's got.

I can make you lie down
and take all of your money.
Or you could get kicked up
courtesy babs bunnie.

But for now, im just a clanless duck named daffy.
When i finally see some more good poetry,
then I'll be happy.                    

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« Reply #95 on: February 27, 2004, 08:14:57 PM »
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no i did not like reading them lol
j/k eh pyro so doh beat meh up


Ahhhhh......damn critics!lol.No scene Polios.I just write it.What you all wanna think of it is up to you.After all I cant control your mind right...........or can I? :P



i was just joking Pyro, they real good, i serious
good work chaos on that vampire poem, very good expression
lol@daffy's poem                    

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« Reply #96 on: February 28, 2004, 08:19:31 AM »
Madd up daffy!
That cool.I think you should participate in the freestyle thread like that.                    

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« Reply #97 on: February 28, 2004, 05:52:17 PM »
Blind

You think that you can see,
But truly you are blind
You see she has you twisted,
So that truth you cannot find.
She is like a spider;
You’re just a fly trapped in her web
And you are toyed with due to feelings;
That come and go with the ebb
She can’t stand to see you happy;
I can’t stand to see you sad
If I had this to do over again;
You is what she would have never had
You are pulled between to worlds,
Hers and that which is real
But I just can’t stand to see you there
With the false love that you feel
But if you really want her
If this is the way it’ll fall
Then I’ll just let you go to her
I’ll just let go of it all
I’ll say the cards were dealt
I’ll say I didn’t like my hand
And so I’ll just disappear
Into the darkness, with time’s sand
You will never see me
Across from you again
Because I can’t stand to see you
Suffer through this pain
You say that you are fine
But I know that that’s pure shit
Because I can tell that you hate
To hear her heartless whit
But if you are too blind
To see my love, so true
Than to leave you all alone
Is the only thing to do.                    


I know your pain, let me make it ......worse.
I know your fears, let me become them.
I know you  dreams, let me haunt them.
Let me make u SCREAM.

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« Reply #98 on: February 28, 2004, 05:54:55 PM »
Smile

Look at a smile in the moonlight,
there’s nothing else like it,
maybe it’s the blood,
Red lips
maybe it’s the magic of
secrets dancing behind those fangs,
but if you look close you’ll
see the tales it’s told
age the centuries
beneath the wide stars, glistening
full of lust and wonder-ment
a smile is not a smile,
when bathed in the ghostly rays of midnight
cause there’s nothing quite like
A smile smiling, grinning,
in the moonlight                    


I know your pain, let me make it ......worse.
I know your fears, let me become them.
I know you  dreams, let me haunt them.
Let me make u SCREAM.

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« Reply #99 on: February 28, 2004, 06:29:15 PM »
Good Daffy i like ur sh!t                    

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