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« Reply #120 on: April 08, 2004, 08:44:57 PM »
...i asked a simple question jed...
...can u be mature and answer it...
...i not spamming...
...i simply askin you somethin about 'YOUR' poetry...                    
...So take mine like a man, you little weiner==>courtesy NEO...FYI...that\'s UBER gay..

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« Reply #120 on: April 08, 2004, 08:44:57 PM »

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« Reply #121 on: April 08, 2004, 09:56:41 PM »
well i am very sorry for saying that and most of my poems came from a specific source if u really dont mind                    
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« Reply #122 on: April 08, 2004, 11:14:36 PM »
SHE COMES TO ME WHEN NIGHT FALLS
WHEN ALL HAS COME TO REST.
SHE COMES TO ME IN MOONLIGHT
TO BE MY SPECIAL GUEST.

SHE COMES TO PASS THE LONELY NIGHT
SHE'S MINE TO SEE AND HEAR.
SHE COMES TO ME, AS ALWAYS,
IN DREAMS I HOLD SO DEAR.

EVERY NIGHT A DIFFERENT DREAM
OF WHAT I WISH COULD BE:
TWO PEOPLE, BATHED IN LOVE-
SHE IS ALL I LONG TO SEE.

THE DREAMS APPEAR SO VERY REAL,
SHE IS ALWAYS KIND AND SWEET.
COULD THEY BE A PREMONITION
OF THE DAY WHEN WE WILL MEET?

ALL I'M LEFT TO DO IS HOPE
FOR A LOVE THAT'S MEANT TO BE.
THIS I DO IN ALL MY DREAMS-
WHEN EACH NIGHT SHE COMES TO ME                    
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« Reply #123 on: April 09, 2004, 07:23:39 PM »
...specific source???
...i thought you wrote them???                    
...So take mine like a man, you little weiner==>courtesy NEO...FYI...that\'s UBER gay..

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« Reply #124 on: April 09, 2004, 07:35:58 PM »
Right now i not going to lower my iq over some poetry if u think i didnt write it i didnt write it if u think i wrote well u think i wrote cuz i not wasting my time on this..                    
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« Reply #124 on: April 09, 2004, 07:35:58 PM »

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« Reply #125 on: April 09, 2004, 10:05:09 PM »
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Right now i not going to lower my iq over some poetry if u think i didnt write it i didnt write it if u think i wrote well u think i wrote cuz i not wasting my time on this..


dude, no offence, but you just did waste your time on it                    

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« Reply #126 on: April 09, 2004, 10:12:21 PM »
A year ago a vow was made,
To end this foolish masquarade
Quite simply put to confess ,
My feelings while i'm at my best
Happy ,sad, confused or lost
Dont matter what i'll pay the cost
For this is somthing i must do ,
I must confess my love for you
That day you walked into my class
A spell on me u then , did cast
An infatuation i couldnt tell
A crush , now does that ring a bell?
And this day i shall call the last
Being the one that marks the end of our past
For after today we may never meet
Making it perfect for this daring feat
An angel , that is how  i see you
Aweet caring and hard working too
An inspiration to run a mile
Your beauty surpassed only by your smile                    
Why Fight It Baby? Your Too Late , You Cant Stop Kajun He\'s Too Great ;)

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« Reply #127 on: April 09, 2004, 10:13:40 PM »
that was a personal composition , it tell the story of a boy in love with a girl he meets.... but the boy hasnt the scrote to do anything bout it                    
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« Reply #128 on: April 09, 2004, 11:15:56 PM »
^^^nice original poem kajun...
...two thumbs up...
...and a big toe...:P                    
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« Reply #129 on: April 11, 2004, 07:14:07 PM »
great poem, good depiction                    

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« Reply #130 on: April 11, 2004, 09:25:16 PM »
Excellent work, Kajun.
I believe that the best forms of poetry are those that are written from the heart. If your heart, your very SOUL is inserted into a poem, there is meaningfulness behind it, and what it results in is creativity in its finest, personally crafted to your perfection.

On a side note, Kajun, I'm on the assumption that by personal you mean that you wrote that for somebody you like. Have you tried showing her this prose yet?
Girls like fellas with an appreciation of the arts, you know...                    

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« Reply #131 on: April 11, 2004, 10:22:06 PM »
^^^thats what i told him...
...but does he listen to me...
...nooooooooooooo...                    
...So take mine like a man, you little weiner==>courtesy NEO...FYI...that\'s UBER gay..

...a drug thats the HIGH not the pill...

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« Reply #131 on: April 11, 2004, 10:22:06 PM »

 


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