Writer's anyone?

[Aka_Neo]

at least post something better than your stupid post                    

[Chaos]

Stop Spammin......                    

[Osiris]

what r u doin chaos ?? not spammin ??

fault excellent poem same goes for g pinkie keep it up guys.........                    

[tha_pong]

Why can't you see,
The way you forced me to be?
The way I cry at night,
Thinking I just might,
Get a glance of you, in my sight.
Why don't you even try,
As your love slowly passes by,
To catch her in the grasp of your heart?
I never wished us, to be apart.
But, don't you even know,
I really do love you so?
But, I certainly will never,
Be able to stand the sever
Of the knife... you placed in my heart


just a lil sum from the inside of me..                    

[Aka_Neo]

dat poem real boss and only a true boss who know poetry like dat especially like chaos and the pong                    

[Fault]

Rhyming couplets rite through... Nice poem overall. but I like to mix up My rhyming techs....                    

[Polios]

sorry i took so long, tstt not letting me on gatt recently. This is the last poem i have on my comp, the rest will be freestyle or going to be made soon. Here:

Untitled
-Kishan Solomon

A shadow passed over,
with a gust of wind following,
to scare trees sober,
with a flash of red lightning,

Down he swooped,
the fierce Red Dragon,
after a flaming loop
that scared a man with a wagon,

"Dragon! Dragon!", he cried,
as he raced through the streets,
but he was soon fried,
right down to his feet,

Hoof beats came from a distant place,
a foe not easy to beat,
a steel man without a face,
a battle with an elite,

On his face a smile was set,
now was his chance
to finally show this dragon death,
"Come on!", he cried, "Let's dance."

A foe worthy enough to be called an enemy,
is one that causes a respectful threat,
as told on the prophesy,
this dragon causes many deaths,

As enemies to each other,
they are forced to fight,
friends would the be rather,
 than foes at sight,

A fire dragon left cold,
Steel amour still hot,
the story not told,
of this battle fought.

Copyright of Polios Productions                    

[tha_pong]

Rhyming couplets rite through... Nice poem overall. but I like to mix up My rhyming techs....

yea horse fuh real eh but i didnt rreally look at that i just put it cuz that was inside and i really didnt take it on but hey, nobody perfect ent..                    

[The_Dark_Goddess]

nice,  great stuff there from fault (that was so beautiful *sniff*) and tha_pong, that was real good, liked it much, and of course we have some interesting stories told by polios, very well done. Keep up the good work people.                    

[androsovic]

The Bombing
I made this up when i was writing a book.I still have it at home but is to type it.This is the intro.

              It was a calm day.Cloudless,birds singing.The usual.The silence was broken by the drone of a EP-226 airship.Noone seemed to be aware of the fate that was to take them.The airship rose higher until it was out of sight;the slight drone the only indicator of its presence.A bomb was pickled and there was a constant whistle,the sound of impending doom.There was a flash of light,a thunderous roar and within seconds an entire city was wiped off the map.This was the first step of the attack on America by madman,Androsovic Herring,leader of an organisation in the fight against Americanism.                    

[Fault]

You shouldn't say stuff like "It was a calm, tranquil day". That's overkill. What are soft clouds? (Not knocking it would like you to explain). And andro doh leh no 'Merican ppl be reading this and figure we anti-america ya know!!                    

[androsovic]

like i said it was in the past.but i'll change it.And for the record,Americans,Gatt isnt Anti American.Only i am                    

[tha_pong]

I see in your eyes,
what I saw once in hers.
I feel in your arms
what I once felt in hers.
I hear in your voice,
what I once heard in hers.
now I'm not sure if that
is good or bad.
she ended up leaving me,
hurting me bad,
so prove to me now...
should I believe in your love?
should I give you my trust?  

hope u like this one..                    

[Anonymous]

Simple and to the point
Will put some more poems up soon..                    

[tha_pong]

ill see what i can do..im kinda busy these days im trying to put in some studies                    

[Polios]

nice work guys, i have to make back my stock, i have some ideas coming anyway
allyuh doing real good, keep it up
androsovic, maybe you should expand that a bit, it seems all too sudden- the plane, the bomb etc                    

[Anonymous]

And heres a nex one from good ole G_Pinkie

Miracles are only achieved, when you believe,
It can be done with your heart and mind,
It stands out on the test of time,
Showing itself every once and awhile,
Though it chooses when it wishes to be,
It has never chosen racially.

What we desire and what we wish,
Not always what we deserve or get.
As life is rough and miracles rare,
We choose out destiny so we can never despair,
But as long as one believes,
In his heart, mind and soul,
Anything can happen, miracles can be achieved.                    

[Aka_Neo]

Bird

Feathers as red as the leaves
descending
from the trees in the
deep and
desolate forest a
cardinal
so beautiful and
free soaring
through the bright
blue yonder
no clouds in sight
just the
smell of pine in
the glimmering snow
below.                    

[Chaos]

nice one.....check this one....

Words - Can kill...

 


Words

Words, once spoken,

can't be taken back,

and they lay there festering,

like rotten fish in a woven sack.

And sticks and stones may break me,

but words also strike at my very heart,

and like an unseen destructive force,

they are slowly tearing me apart.

I'm so sad, I'm so mad,

everybody is talking about me,

nasty things, cruel things,

why can't they just let it be?

And I know how I can end this misery,

simple, a bottle and too many pills,

and these words will have blood on their hands,

one more of the unjust, unpunished and merciless kills.

Do you know how bad my life is?

Go on, just spend a day in my shoes,

I bet you'd be too scared to tread that path,

because, like me, you might find you've everything to lose.

And I've screamed out for help,

and those closest to me, sadly, struck out,

and I'm learning some very hard lessons

about life, love and what suffering is all about.

But there's one thing I'm holding onto,

and this is the truth, and this I know,

your cruel and heartless words can't hurt me,

and this valley is where my seed of greatness will grow.

 

So, talk, gossip, chatter all you like,

I am strong and I will learn to carry on,

because I know that I am right,

and you, undoubtedly, are cruel and so very wrong.


And if I have to tread this path on my own,

then so be it, I will find the strength within,

I will learn how to manage these feelings,

I will learn how to start again, how to begin.

Finally, I think friends should be friends,

and if they're not, they're simply anchors who weigh you down,

and no more will they suck from my cup of kindness,

because control is just another abstract noun.                    

[tha_pong]

I see the change in your attitude
we don't talk like we did before
I think what we had is gone
I hope not, but I'm quite sure
I wish we could have had something
something special that would last
But my wish wasn't been granted
because our relationship finished quite fast
I wish we could at least have our friendship
but I think that's gone too
Even though you don't feel the same way
remember my heart will always belong to you
I guess everything we had is no longer
all I have is memories of you and me
I wish I could have saved what we had
but just maybe it wasn't meant to be
So here I say farewell,
this is just for the best
You're the first to take a piece of my heart
but you probably could care less
Now I say my final good-bye
I'm sorry it has to be this way
I can't believe this is the end
I'm sorry but that's how it must stay