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Offline Imperial_X

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« Reply #120 on: December 14, 2003, 12:23:15 AM »
She's fast, she's slow,
You'll never know,
She keeps you guessin just how she'll come,
She dissapears when she is done...
Slashing and ripping and kicking your ass,
She lets you die there in the grass,
The very place where you once stood your ground,
Your lifeless limbs now to be found...
Relentless dreams of demon slaying,
She will end her journey, not now I'm praying,
She jumps, she spins right in your face,
Yes, damn right she owns your base,
She ownz me too, but it's all good,
She's on my side, you'll knock on wood,
My life...my...saviour... my winning spree..
My warrior princess ownz all for free,
I think I love you...Taki!!!!!!!

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This is what happens when you can type too much in a minute's time.                    
Consciousness yearn to kill
To re-affirm the will,
Zealous I burn the drill
Forging, I mould the skill.

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« Reply #120 on: December 14, 2003, 12:23:15 AM »

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« Reply #121 on: December 14, 2003, 12:28:44 AM »
*crowds go wild and throw items on stage when imperial finishes reciting*

ploi!!!!!! i just LOVE those lil game based poems of yours, more...i need more!!!!                    

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« Reply #122 on: December 14, 2003, 12:30:02 AM »
Big lyrics from imperial,
i think i love she to from the way u does go on bout she.                    

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« Reply #123 on: December 14, 2003, 01:08:51 AM »
lol@imperial
aye, bout time DG put some stuff up, i read them already but you have to share it
what goes around comes around, see you force me to put stuff up the pinkie for you :-P

imperial that was dred, thas idleness, or is it if it doesn't take any time?
pinkie, thas real good, i was thinking bout doing that same topic but i guess it taken now
DG, that was great as always, let's hope you post more....sometime
i have a new poem, but i gotta show it to DG first, so i'll get back to allyuh                    

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« Reply #124 on: December 14, 2003, 01:31:03 PM »
WHY, dare i ask WHY????????!!!!!!! do u insist on showing me these things FIRST????
just post the damn things man!                    

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« Reply #124 on: December 14, 2003, 01:31:03 PM »

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« Reply #125 on: December 14, 2003, 05:17:44 PM »
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WHY, dare i ask WHY????????!!!!!!! do u insist on showing me these things FIRST????
just post the damn things man!


you're just my test dumm... i mean pre-reader

alright, here's the poem i was talking about

Forgotten Worlds
by Kishan Solomon

I see the gulls fly,
I see the roaring sea ,
below the mist so high,
Just me and my boat,
and the pirate's of the key.
The battle fierce,
Like cowards they flee.
Where am I?
The Forgotten Sea

Spin the world,
Flash the past,
I don't know,
Just make it fast,

Along the mountain peek,
I hear the eagles call,
I hear the whispering wind,
As silent as the ninjas fall,
I hear them face me,
Air filled with sin,
I hear them all,
like thugs in an alley,
Where am I?
The Forgotten Valley

Spin the world,
Flash the past,
I don't know,
Just make it fast,

I feel the thorns so sharp,
I feel their presence,
I run through the trees,
I feel the mist,
I feel the air and leaves.
I feel the cobra's kiss,
Where am I?
The Forgotten Forrest.

Spin the world,
Flash the past,
I don't know,
Just make it fast,

In the Shadows of the past,
Lay the beast of Retrospect.

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« Reply #126 on: December 14, 2003, 05:25:25 PM »
this is my newest work, enjoy...

            Loneliness...


Darkness consumes my mind, fear eats at my heart,
My inner demons come to me like a psychotic killer
Waiting for an innocent to murder.
I crouch in the safety of my corner,
My cold, dusty, little place I call a safe haven,
Waiting for the right time to come out of my shell of fear...

I feel like I have been sent to solitary confinement,
Sitting in the icy, dark, lonely corner of my room,
Thinking of all the things that went wrong in my life,
And hoping to travel back in time to correct my mistakes.
Since when did I feel this way!? It's so unexpected,
As if someone deliberately screwed with my mind...

I am in a trance, can I escape it!? Or do I have to stay,
And socialize with all the shadows of my mind,
My fears, my doubts, my insecurities, all of them, in my mind,
All congested in the deepest part of my subconscious,
Never to be released, for it can either free me, or destroy me.
One way or the other, I stay in my corner, to safe myself and my friends...

The conflict continues, the battle that rages on in my head,
A fight between my conscious and my subconscious, gruesome and never-ending,
But it only results as a headache of unknown proportions on the outside,
While it becomes a full scale war on the inside.
Someone must help me find a cure, find a solution to my problem,
Help release me from my fear and loneliness, and set my spirit free.

It's as if I can't breathe when I feel like this,
Cause my fear suffocates me like a pillow over my face,
When I'm lonely, I tend to blame other things, minor and miniscule,
Am I just a pesky little boy to everyone like this, or is it just me??
I can't even tell myself, but some choices I make, I always tend to regret,
It's as if I crave for some form of attention, but I don't want that craving...

I can't help it!! It's too much to bear!!
It's killing me inside!!! Please make it stop!!!
The pain, too massive to embrace and so uncontrollable,
It makes me want to kill myself, but only my morals hold me back.
Even though it causes hatred, jealousy and other emotions around me
To rise, even at the most unexpected times...

I am alone in this world, always have, always been and perhaps always will be,
But can the people, whom I hold dear to my heart, my friends,
Make my spirit feel alive again?                    
It\'s Not Over Yet, not by a long shot.....


May your soul be spared by the miraculous sword from heaven......Zetsumyoken

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« Reply #127 on: December 15, 2003, 09:22:50 AM »
well then i say,if its originality you want,then its originality you shall have.MUAHHAHAHAHAHA

The Assassination
         
      Androsovic walked coolly across the Queen's Park Savannah,the wind blowing in his face and his heavy pack on his back.He jumped the fence of the hockey field near the Princess Building Grounds and sat calmly in the grass.He was on a mission.A mission to eliminate the voice of oppression.He smiled as he thought of this to himself.
      He donned his ghillie suit and took out his Russian SVN-98 sniper rifle of bullpup design.He outfitted it with a silencer,to decrease range as well as to silence the shot,for he couldn't bear the blood of innocent on his hands.He went in the prone position and faced Bishops Anstey High School.He could see the guard strolling on patrol at the front gate.
      The bell rang,and girls poured out like a raging river which had just burst its banks.He searched for his target.Finally he saw her,walking out with such pomp,surrounded by her loyal followers.They had treated her like she was a Goddess.She was no Goddess in his book.To him,she represented the voice corruption and oppression.
       Androsovic knew the time had come.He put his eye to the scope and centred the crosshairs on her head.Where should he do it?Legs?Arms?Should he make her suffer?To him, it didn't matter,for he must rid the world of this dark 'goddess'.He squeezed the trigger and the report was no louder than that of a car door closing.She dropped to the ground and he could make out all the followers rushing to her aid.The guard drew his weapon and looked around.No one could see Androsovic even if he told them where he was.He aimed at the guard and fired."Take that for being a mc,"he said.
       Androsovic put his weapon back in his pack and walked away boldly,ghillie suit and all.He felt good.The world was free of corruption.For now.
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« Reply #128 on: December 15, 2003, 02:39:02 PM »
Boy.......dread story...i had some of the same thoughts since i joined gatt.                    


I know your pain, let me make it ......worse.
I know your fears, let me become them.
I know you  dreams, let me haunt them.
Let me make u SCREAM.

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« Reply #129 on: December 15, 2003, 03:17:36 PM »
i will bring some bad pics here soon                    
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« Reply #130 on: December 15, 2003, 04:01:25 PM »
wow...
thanx andro for showing me this thread...
...i actually read all the poems and stories...

...however...
...i write two types of poems...
...the first type which is inspired by true events which i feel uncomfortable sharing...
...and the next set are written based on my mood...which varies quite often...

...so...
...as a result i dont think it may be appropriate to post them...
...but big up to everyone who posted...                    
...So take mine like a man, you little weiner==>courtesy NEO...FYI...that\'s UBER gay..

...a drug thats the HIGH not the pill...

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« Reply #131 on: December 15, 2003, 04:19:07 PM »
Opaque Walls

Craving growth and comfort,
Coming slowly to humanity.
The opaque walls towering above me
Remind me that I am alone here.
Crawling forward, coveting,
Falling forward, wanting,
Pushing furthur into the grey.

I'm not quite there.

The chaos that enshrouds me
Paths slowly before me.
So slowly it pains me
And drags me among the walls.
Confusion spirals throuhg me
Distorting every lie
Distorting everything you say.

I'm almost there.

It's almost transparent to me,
Now that my emotions have deserted me,
I can't feel anything you say,
I can't hear your lies,
I can't see you anyway.
The walls are fading slowly.
So sad, I must ignore you because

I'm still not there.                    

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« Reply #132 on: December 15, 2003, 05:32:02 PM »
i write a bit but the songs are a bit satanic so i doh think i should post em here :S

also these were written in form 2 a very painful and confusing year for me so these lyrics are very raw and may be offensive to some....                    

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« Reply #133 on: December 15, 2003, 05:46:45 PM »
plz post them...then i mite feel a lil more comfortable posting mine...                    
...So take mine like a man, you little weiner==>courtesy NEO...FYI...that\'s UBER gay..

...a drug thats the HIGH not the pill...

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« Reply #134 on: December 15, 2003, 05:54:18 PM »
just post on is what i say                    

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« Reply #135 on: December 15, 2003, 06:03:32 PM »
aright fine doh say i didn't warn u
these things have no names when i was in form 2 i questioned why songs need to have names which is why all 3 of the songs i wrote have no name........

Dark Shadows lie over the city
Tonight someone will die, you can hear
Some painful scream the air is full of flies
The mayhemic legions are ready to steal the human souls
Come into my vault and do what you have been told
I'll eat your intestines no matter if you pray or please
I'll bring you down to your knees
Tonight you're gonna meet your fate you'll try to run but it's too
Late I am here to liquidate

Time to raise your flag of hate
Destroy the world is our only aim
To strike them down is the only way to make'em dead
And make'em pay
The gallow of the underground shippers on the sea of blood
All what we want is to crucify your God
The posers on this earth have no right to live
We gonna split their brains torture is what we give                    

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« Reply #136 on: December 15, 2003, 06:07:10 PM »
sounds like an anti american song i wrote last year or so                    

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« Reply #137 on: December 15, 2003, 06:13:23 PM »
lol is actually supposed to be a death/black metal song :S                    

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« Reply #138 on: December 15, 2003, 06:15:35 PM »
Walking with my head on backwards,
i broke my neck, spun it around…
Pretending, imagining, squandering.
The blood flow continues vigorously,
It mixes with the cold air…
freezing, rotting, mutilating.
The blood becomes old, the bones deteriorate,
The heart keeps a beat.
The head sways back and forth,
Then it falls at my feet.
Stab my heart, crush my eyes, burn my
tongue, stuff my nose…
Shake out my soul, f#@k my ass, caress
my breasts…
Lying lifeless
Lying still
Lying with hate.                    
...So take mine like a man, you little weiner==>courtesy NEO...FYI...that\'s UBER gay..

...a drug thats the HIGH not the pill...

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« Reply #139 on: December 15, 2003, 06:17:00 PM »
Nice One Drug......                    

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