Writer's anyone?

[The_Dark_Goddess]

i like it pinkie
and fault, that was more or less the same thing i said to polios the first time i read it.

me? i am not making excuses..*runs away*

okay okay, seriously though i will need to type up most of what i have. So i promise i will write something, anything! and just put it up by..um gimme a week cuz i leavin tomorrow.                    

[Polios]

1) doh forget DG, we looking forward to it
2) thank you Fault, you just doubled the amount of ppl who i know like it, this may be because i don't show my poems to anyone. I don't really think they're good so i don't think anyone would bother
3) here's another poem, cuz i actually feeling generous

Where The Rivers Flow
by ME!!!! :

There are lands thither
Over the mountains
Where plants don't wither
And there are rainbow fountains

I wish to see that place
But I may never go
No, not in my case
To where the rivers flow

That is where you are
So far away from here
Alas it is too far
But ne'er do I feel fear

I shall journey forward
And we shall meet
I am no coward
I shall keep my feet

Once more will I see you
Your smiling face aglow
And in return, I smile too
As the clear rivers flow

Then I shall hold your hand
And in a trance
We'll fly and never land
And leave it all to chance


Copyright of Polios Productions

that's it, not all may relate to it cuz it was a personal thing but i made it as open to interpretation as possible so as to not limit the ppl who'll like it. Problem is that i did all this, but i end up not showing anyone, only DG ever saw this one before i put it here                    

[Fault]

What can I say. It's really 'cute' but kinda whimsical and nonsensical, but then you said not all would relate to it and that's just my opinion. Can't say I like it. Sorry. *Being honest here* Didja write this when you were younger?

Here's my submittal for today....

Precious

I was never content with with my life,
That is, until, you  came along,
When I see you I forget all my strife,
You replace all my sorrow with a song.

A song of hope, a song of joy,
You've made a man, out of this boy.
You inspire me, to better be,
Yes you bring out, the best in me.

I can't stop looking at you,
You're so pretty, I love to just stare into your eyes,
And you are just so cute,
Blushing and smiling all the while.

You treat me like I'm something more,
Than the simple person I am,
And for this, I will in turn,
Treat you the best I can.

Nothing can compare to the way you make feel,
I can't believe that this is real.
I've never felt quite this way,
Please, stay with me always.

There is some stuff in there that related exactly to someone and myself so not everybody will feel it all.                    

[Zero-X]

Love...

Is it possible to love a person to a great extent,
So great that it excels any other known thing,
But what if it was mistaken for lust...
What then!? Does it all fall apart?
Or does the love flourish for years and years...

No one can say whether love is good or bad,
Some take it as God's blessing and embraces it,
While others, only seem to obuse it as if it were a toy,
Meant for them to do as they see fit.
It's so disgusting, that it makes my heart cry, and my soul scream.

Can loved be embraced without sex!?
Or is it just an addition to having two people release their hormonal rage,
Who can say which is right and which is wrong,
For everyone has their own aspect,
Of what love should be, and how it should be cherished.

I sometimes dream of love, how wonderful such a feeling could be like,
I lay under the starry sky and wonder for hours on end,
Of how my life would be like to have someone to love
Someone to cherish, someone to cuddle and talk to,
But sometimes the dream, turns to a nightmare.

I can't figure out myself when i think about it,
It's as if my mind transcends time and space,
Searching for all the answers to my questions,
Yet when i think about it, i already had the answer
And it was in front me all along, i just never realised it,
Until it was too late, for the answer was as plain as day...
"You are loved by all, you just don't know it, that's all"

Copyrights of Zero-X...Merry Christmas   :-D  :-D  :-D                    

[Zero-X]

Reality...Real or a Fantasy!?

Why can't i tell the difference,
Its so complicated this way
For i know not what is reality,
nor what is fantasy.
At one point, it feels so real,
it tastes so real and smells real
but it turns into a figment of my imagination.

Can someone help me escape the so called 'fake world'?
Or am i trapped here forever,
To continuously indulge in the senseless acts of this world...
To become one of my most feared imaginations possible.
The more i behave like this, the more i change,
And the more i change, the more i lose myself,
It's not fair, it's just not fair...

Day by day, step by step, i keep on changing,
Ever losing a piece of my true self,
To something called my doppleganger.
How could this be!? Have i lost control!?
Do i hide everytime something ominous occurs,
Or do i have the courage to stand to the bitterness of reality?
The truth is, reality is never what you want it to be,
But it's up to me to accept it or not.

Hopefully, when i regain my true self,
I will be reborn, but only time will tell,
Fate, destiny and purpose possibly as well.
For i have the guidance of my friends,
The wisdom of my parents,
But they do not make the choice,
Only i can make the choice...

Copyright of Zero-X...and have a Happy New Year....                    

[Evangelion_01]

Trying to be Satan's son doesn't get you many friends man.  lmao

True True man LOL. But from one writer to another-It still DAMN funny watching other people gape ent?                    

[androsovic]

Now, dear children, pay attention
I am the voice from the pillow
I have brought you something
I ripped it from my chest

With this heart I have the power
to blackmail the eyelids
I sing until the day awakes
a bright light on the heavens
my heart burns

They come to you in the night
demons, ghosts, black fairies
they creep out of the cellar shaft
and will look under your bedding

Now, dear children, pay attention
I am the voice from the pillow
I have brought you something
a bright light on the heavens
my heart burns

They come to you in the night
and steal your small hot tears
they wait until the moon awakes
and put them in my cold veins

Now, dear children, pay attention
I am the voice from the pillow
I sing until the day awakes
a bright light on the heavens
my heart burns

My heart burns

MEIN HERZT BRENNT from Rammstein(English translation)
I like these lyrics                    

[The_Dark_Goddess]

nice polios n nice fault, and nice zero-x.
still workin on it, i only got in last night...

oh yeah and andro, your OWN lyrics please, not someone else's                    

[androsovic]

what?steupse.i thought it would be a beautiful ting to post.i didnt say it was mine. all allyuh ppl oppressing the i-man                    

[Polios]

hmm, this thread is good, i like alot of these
here another one by me
Carpe Dium
- Kishan Solomon

I love thee with all my heart,
but shall you ever know the truth?
Will you accept me if given?
Old bonds shall be broken,
New ones there shall be,
for good or bad,
I will take them.

Even if our feelings are the same,
What then?
Where do we go?
Who can we turn to?
The world is cruel,
we are on our own,
I will not let you go till the end,
which is far from near.

Your hair shimmers the colors of the rainbow in the sun,
but you glow radiantly in the moonlight,
You move with grace of an angel,
but have the beauty of Aphrodite,
Your crystal eyes shine,
as you glide across,
it is topped off by a smile.

Your heart is compassionate,
and your soul pure,
You think of others before yourself,
you want to help the world,
I wish to help you,
We shall find a world of peace,
just take my hand.

Copyright of Polios Productions
Happy Christmas                    

[The_Dark_Goddess]

no andro i know and i didnt mean to insult you.
it IS nice
all i meant was the thread was meant for people to post their own work.

lol@polios productions
yeah man

anyway, i like it.                    

[androsovic]

u can oppress my voice all you like,Dark Goddess but you'll never break my spirit!                    

[Anonymous]

From wat i see so far ppl have some skill in poetry, all of them are good, thou some are better than others. I not makin any comments cause i aint a professional, and i have my own style of writing. But also i aint hearing anything bout short storeys. Hopefully get my pc in workin order to put some more stuff up.

Andro who oppressin? ever heard of freedom of speech
Also i thought communist oppress ppl!!!  :shock:                    

[The_Dark_Goddess]

oppress..
okay
*lost*

for the LOVE OF GOD!!!!
i have not yet written anything to be put here as i promised but for the sake of my sanity i will post something i wrote a long time ago to go with a story based on a chick named Sulene.

A Kiss of Wind
A breath of Air
A dance in the evening sun
Follow the stars, they will lead you there
To where moonlight and magic touch the land
A whisper of water
A touch of sand
A frolic in the waves of morning
Follow the rivers, they will take you there
To where moonlight and magic touch the land
A twist of vines
A blade of grass
A gift given to the earth
Follow the footsteps, they will carry you there
To where moonlight and magic touch the land
A spark of fire
A shiver of cold
A wish made to the sky
Follow the lights, they will show you where
Where moonlight and magic touch the land.

i had to type it all just now so forgive any typoes, titled Moonlight and Magic (duh)

now pinkie...leave me alone!!! :P                    

[The_Dark_Goddess]

i know that it aint much but like i sed, written long ago.
i'll get something better
promise.                    

[Anonymous]

Bigup to DG for finally puttin up sumtin, it waz about time!!!!!
I tellin u she have some real good stuff. :bowing:
Worship the Dark Goddess  :worship:                    

[The_Dark_Goddess]

Bigup to DG for finally puttin up sumtin, it waz about time!!!!!
I tellin u she have some real good stuff. :bowing:  
Everybody who likes say I

*archs eyebrow at pinkie and sighs in exasperation*
about time...steeeeuuuupssss!!!!

i just want you all to know that pinkie harrass the hell outta for the past 4 or 5 days eh...

here's one more so i could shut up for a while:

background info: Amaya the goddess has a cult called the Blood. Her most sacred ritual is performed by the highest class of followers at night during winter.

Blood Dance

Dance with me, my sister of Blood
Is my life not red as yours?
My grace is perfection
the perfection you crave
be not envious, this dance is for all
our swords shall test
our blood shall celebrate
oh dance with me, my sister of Blood
sway now left
leap now right
dance to the rhythm of the full moon
the goddess shall hear
the goddess shall come
and Evening shall see Night
oh dance, oh dance my sister of Blood
the evening comes
the Night is here
the moon shines full on our face
the goddess sends luck
the goddess sends faith
in the form of the blood on our blades.

once more i just typed it cuz i not on my own comp, so any errors plz forgive etc etc                    

[Anonymous]

Being inspired by DG , i postin my latest work.

The lyrics in my mind,
Breaking ot from time time,
Giving me a taste of dynamic expression,
To the eternal realm, poetic notion.
I am a man with burning desires,
Thinking with my soul so devine,
Impressions i get and write about,
Never holding pride or doubt,
A sense of awe and potential in me,
Untapped resources fighting most desperatly,
To free itself of the confines of the mind,
Dareing to burst forward to leave nothing behind.                    

[Anonymous]

Aye harass is not the word i would say
Stimulate is what i would say  :-D                    

[The_Dark_Goddess]

Aye harass is not the word i would say
Stimulate is what i would say  :-D

uh huh..suuuuuuuuuuuure
excuses excuses..hmph