The Poetry Thread.........

[Aka_Neo]

i started this thread because dark goddes said to easy off the poetry from the writers anyone thread  and she said we might need a separate thread for poetry so we could post stories in one thread and poetry in another........i have some poems i wrote and saved on a diskette over the pass few weeks so hears one:

God took the twinkle of the stars
and put them in your eyes
He painted you with sunshine
taken from the skies

He gave you strength as the old oak tree
but he also gave you, humility
He gave you humor as one of His gifts
with the ability to encourage and uplift

Everyone who passes
across your path can say
Isn't he wonderful in
his own special way

And the best gift of all
was given to you
It's the patience to wait,
to see things through

And when His will
is plain to see
We'll be together,
just you and me                    

[Bong53]

Fit The Mold
copyright 2002 Colby Stratton (Yes I used my real name)
a short note on my writing: my grammer is not meant to be proper but instead I use capitals, commas, etc for accentuation.


Fit the mold, Fit the mold
Whispering, Chanting
Conform to our belief and our styles
Fit the mold Fit the mold
it isn't worth your while
change your ways and extend your days
Conform they say
Fit the mold, Fit the mold
You'll nevver rearrange your thoughts, your words
into that final revolutionary verb
That melts our hearts and brings us to tears
We've lost them over the years
Fit the mold, Fit the mold
still they jeer
Or you'll be crushed, nothing left but fear
Their lives, their lies
Evil deeds they hold dear
Will soon be stripped from them;
Along with all they hold near
Fit the mold
Fit the mold, they cry
Not knowing that in just a year they will die
In a massive upheaval
The blink of an eye
Repressed thoughts and lives
Like a spring wound tight,
pushed just a little too far
Ideas break loose
Throwing opposition afar
Minds and Philosophies
entire cultures released
Taking over this society
The revolution has been heard
and the oppression has ceased
Now the silence listens for a single word
The voices will not be heard
They got what they deserved
The mold has been broken, it will not be heard.



That was written when a couple of years back and I was sort of a loner.
maybe it should be called outcast...nah                    

[Bong53]

this is a rough draft, I just thought I would write about my clan...

There is a legend of long ago,
of a great bird soaring on wings of fire,
glowing so brightly in the night.
Imps and orcs, crazy and sane
Travelers came from far away
to tell of this light of life.
The sailors, they sang of a blazing bird, "the heros of Mars and Hercules"
they sang "pale in his fiery light"
Until that horrible day of black
When the light burnt out
There was no turning back
Lost in the night without a doubt
Now darkness envelops the sky
A world full of greed and hate
Now we are the remnant
We are the clan
We are those left...
Waiting on him

There are SEVERAL problems with it...I know I just threw it together in 5 or 10 minutes. If my clan likes the jist of it I may touch it up...otherwise I will just discard it.                    

[The_Dark_Goddess]

(i like this thread it have sum nice stuff)

and thanks for startin d thread                    

[Anonymous]

this is a rough draft, I just thought I would write about my clan...

There is a legend of long ago,
of a great bird soaring on wings of fire,
glowing so brightly in the night.
Imps and orcs, crazy and sane
Travelers came from far away
to tell of this light of life.
The sailors, they sang of a blazing bird, \"the heros of Mars and Hercules\"
they sang \"pale in his fiery light\"
Until that horrible day of black
When the light burnt out
There was no turning back
Lost in the night without a doubt
Now darkness envelops the sky
A world full of greed and hate
Now we are the remnant
We are the clan
We are those left...
Waiting on him

There are SEVERAL problems with it...I know I just threw it together in 5 or 10 minutes. If my clan likes the jist of it I may touch it up...otherwise I will just discard it.

really cool bong fix it up
and the clan go do what they have to do..                    

[Anonymous]

this is a rough draft, I just thought I would write about my clan...

There is a legend of long ago,
of a great bird soaring on wings of fire,
glowing so brightly in the night.
Imps and orcs, crazy and sane
Travelers came from far away
to tell of this light of life.
The sailors, they sang of a blazing bird, \"the heros of Mars and Hercules\"
they sang \"pale in his fiery light\"
Until that horrible day of black
When the light burnt out
There was no turning back
Lost in the night without a doubt
Now darkness envelops the sky
A world full of greed and hate
Now we are the remnant
We are the clan
We are those left...
Waiting on him

There are SEVERAL problems with it...I know I just threw it together in 5 or 10 minutes. If my clan likes the jist of it I may touch it up...otherwise I will just discard it.

Remix

A legend of things great,
A bird soaring on wings of fire,
A glow radiating into the night,
All that see are in awe,
The splendour of such a thing,
Graceful in the skies it flies,
No man can tame,
Though there were few that thought otherwise,
Thus leading to their demise.

A shadow, Pitch black,
Crossed the land,
When the light burnt out,
There was no turning back,
Hearts filled of gree and hate,
A devine legend tainted,
Now left is but a remnant,
We are those left,
We are Devil's Phoenix                    

[Chaos]

A divine soul...

I borrowed from the heavens
clutched it close to my bosom,
sustained only by its love.

Barely could I hold its gaze,
breathless and awestruck
its effects linger presently.

The heavens reclaimed it
wrestled it from my arms
and placed it back where it belonged.

Far above me...
I had no right...
    -only loss remains.                    

[Chaos]

I never saw it coming,
It hit without warning.
Why I didn't run...
I'll never know.

At first it felt warm and inviting,
But, now I only fear it.

I feel it dragging me under,
Like a warm ocean wave.
Then, wonderful and completing,
Now, dread filled and deadly.

Who cares where my body will land,
For my soul will never be free...                    

[Aka_Neo]

Whisper my name in
his ear through the wind.

  Tell him my love, that
I'm here for him.

  Have a bird perched,
just in sight, singing my love.

  And a cloud burst, for the tears
from up above.

  And, then whisper my name
in the wind, once again.

  Tell him the sorrow
that will, in time, end.

  And then show him the
joy in the short time we've made.

Then, whisper my name in the wind..                    

[Aka_Neo]

You have come to me from a distant land,
Dreamer of dreams, to fill my hearts desire,
Sweet music flowing from your nimble hand
That plays within... to light my passion's fire.

A symphony of word and thought you bring.
Excitement builds upon crescendo's sound,
Brought forth in tones to make my light heart sing
For all the beauty that, with you, I've found.

A life is changed in just an instant's time,
All darkness fled before that brillaint sun
That shines from spoken words of softest rhyme
And speaks of treasures, only just begun.

This mystic meeting gives my heart a glow
That few have seen and only you will know.                    

[kid_dan-o-myte]

now i think this should put some humour

Now there is this man from Timbuktu,
Whose LIMRECKS stop at line two.                    

[Osiris]

dude shut up man

This One Was Written By Sephiriku

Release my saddned soul now from this tragic life,
Release my mind from all burden and strife
How i have longed to die and escape these evil lands
Goddamn these pious humans and their demands
Damn their lies and their selfish needs
They have broken my spirit with their selfish deeds.
They sucked the love right out of my soul
They have taken the hate out of my control
Made my mind up to change my path
My anger more swift that heavens wrath
My rage more violent that a roar of thunder
Perverse bastards,for you i wonder
Will you know how i feel,my happiness banned,
will you know how i am damned?                    

[kid_dan-o-myte]

i read this one somewhere but i dont noe where

one summer morning
in the middle of the night
twoo dead bodies
got up to fight
back to back
they faced each other
and drew thier swords
to shot one another


if you dont beleive me just ask

the blind man that saw the action the deaf man who heard the commotion or the mute who spoke about it in court.                    

[QDizzle]

your an idiot yuh messin up a perfectly deep thrread                    

[Osiris]

your an idiot yuh messin up a perfectly deep thrread

weeyyyzzzz aren't u usually the idiot ??                    

[QDizzle]

:withS2:  :stupid:  


:lame:

like yuh wha a FIG fuh dah or yuh wanted somebody to waltz in the thread an big yuh up steups  :kneel:                    

[Chaos]

Voice of your Heart.....


When you think about life
And all its negative things,
Scary thoughts occur,
Great fears it brings.
Dealing with friends
Who betrayed your trust.
Standing alone in the rain
From dawn to dusk.
Losing the man
With whom you wished to share your dreams,
Leaves you with eyes like clouds
And tears like streams.
With family members
Arguing from day to night,
Makes you want to run away
From that unpleasant sight.
School is hard,
Doing work you don’t understand.
Walking down a road
Holding no future in your hand.
Your world is dark,
Empty and confused.
You feel angry, frustrated,
And completely used.
Everything is unclear,
You only see death on the way.
This life isn’t worth living,
It should be taken away.
But then there’s a small voice
That suddenly appears.
Looking all around... you
Can’t seem to find it anywhere.
This little voice said,
“There’s a whole lot more to life.
Everyone goes through joy,
Happiness, pain and strife.
There are people who love you,
And you will meet new friends.
Everyday is a new experience,
It’s just a matter of where and when.”
That is when you calm down
And begin to think.
After all, life can be good
And have its positive things.
You can have an education
If you’re willing to learn.
You’re future is the road ahead,
Considering which way you turn.
You have been hurt,
Betrayed, denied and used.
But people will know your importance
Depending on the kind of friends you choose.
Not having a boyfriend
Isn’t the end of the world.
He’s not worth loving
If he leaves you for another girl.
It’s normal for a family to argue,
‘Cause that’s how they compromise.
If you think problems can’t be solved
Then you’re not very wise.
This little voice saved your life-
Didn’t keep you and the world apart.
That’s when you realize this voice...
Is the “voice of your heart”.                    

[Chaos]

Another Tear...

we were once best friends
My love so true so dear;
but then it came to an end
and then there were only tears.

My love for you only grew stronger
but yours never came.
Our love should have lasted longer.
Why did you have to act so lame?

I cared about you deeply
and I cried so much.
Now I talk to you meekly.
I miss your soul and touch.

Now I am just lost,
playing things by ear.
Now I know what love can cost...
Is that another tear?                    

[Chaos]

I Hate.


i hate the way you talk to me,
as if i don't exist.
i hate the sweet remarks you make to me,
and then don't mean a word of it.
i hate the way you leave me guessing,
what is right and what is wrong.

i hate the way you build me up,
just to let me fall.
i hate the way my heart seems to always latch on.
but most of all, i hate the way i love you,
the way i can't seem to let go.

i try to keep holding on,
when there is nothing left to hold.
i walk, mindlessly, through the darkness,
failing to understand just what happened here.
was it another one of my twisted dreams
i can't seem to grasp?
or a glimpse of me, just reliving the past?

i stop for a minute and rest.
how did i get myself into this horrendous mess?
it all started with just a little feeling
that grew into something more,
something with meaning.
and this is where i stand today,
afraid to look back,
yet, to scared to stay.

when i feel like i can't go on,
i turn and look for you
to pick me up and help me through.
but you are nowhere to be found,
you're out of reach, and i'm slowly stumbling down.

more of the reasons why i hate you
and it still gets to me,
how i can love you through it all
and just can't seem to let it die.                    

[Aka_Neo]

yeah that is ah good poem boy chaos i wish i could wirte like u cuz right now i lackin some skills maybe i should come by u sometime and yuh will teach meh ah ting or two