Author Topic: Writer's anyone? (Read 67147 times)

androsovic · « **Reply #20 on:** November 28, 2003, 03:18:37 PM »

rooooight.all my short stories on paper but i will write a short,short story for u.

THE DEATH OF A SNIPER
Jon pulled out his Karabiner 98 and crept into the thick undergrowth.He could hear gunfire and approaching panicked footsteps. "Sounds like they are retreating this way," he said to himself.
Suddenly everything stopped.And Jon could make out the feet of Allied soldiers.Shooting them from this close would be suicide as he would definitely not have time to reload his bolt action rifle.
Moving stealthily,Jon could now see their faces,war torn and painful.
They were discussing something,in English,Jon wished he had paid more attention in English class.
Jon could hear approaching gunfire and the Allied soldiers starting rapidly talking and doing ammo counts.Jon smiled to himself as he could see that they were low on ammunition. The soldiers now ran a considerable distance away from Jon and he now saw this as his oppurtunity.
Unveiling himself by crouchng out in the open,he took aim.One Allied soldier fell and like panicked ants they all ducked for cover. Jon scanned the area.He could make out a helmet.The Allied soldiers loved to snipe the little points off of the top of German helmets,Jon thought that he would snipe the helmets for fun.
Jon fired at the helmet and as he did,there was an almost instantaneous response of a single gunshot.Jon felt as if a bomb went off in his head and dropped his rifle.He now realised that he could only see out of one eye and that sight in his other eye was failing.
He grasped for breath and felt it harder to support himself and collapsed dully.Jon died,sniped by Androsovic,6th Scout Division,Russian Army who was hidden in the bushes.

Carigamers · « **Reply #20 on:** November 28, 2003, 03:18:37 PM »

The_Dark_Goddess · « **Reply #21 on:** November 28, 2003, 03:24:24 PM »

lol, ploy andro!!!
you know it isnt as bad as it might seem.
um...interesting concept?

Imperial_X · « **Reply #22 on:** November 28, 2003, 04:46:28 PM »

I mean nah. Everybody in herre could LEVEL wax lyrical. Great story there by DG. Nice poems by Pinkie and Showtime.

Andro, man, lay off the Call of Duty man. lmao.

androsovic · « **Reply #23 on:** November 28, 2003, 04:53:51 PM »

I make that up!thaz original Androsovician thinking right there brother man. and i know is u who was on jacques account...MUAHAHHA

Imperial_X · « **Reply #24 on:** November 28, 2003, 04:59:18 PM »

Huh?

Carigamers · « **Reply #24 on:** November 28, 2003, 04:59:18 PM »

The_Dark_Goddess · « **Reply #25 on:** November 28, 2003, 05:05:16 PM »

alrighty fellas, we doh care about who on what account so get back to the point please

andro it was kinda obvious yuh just make it up.

but isnt that the point of original writing...? make it up!

ty imperial.

Anonymous · « **Reply #26 on:** November 28, 2003, 10:36:16 PM »

Yea it have some real good artists in here,
it would be better if we had some more ppl showin off they talents in here

Paine · « **Reply #27 on:** November 28, 2003, 11:47:55 PM »

--PROLOGUE--

"Break apart my heart, because a red sorrow is spilling out from it...I want to smash it to pieces. As if I were screaming, I call out your name...But feeling isn't just by chance I call out to you now, with my tears...so just who are you? Sadness and happiness repeat themselves again. Forget everything, break it all off. Please don't embrace my longing secretly in your arms...because I'm fine just the way I am."
"..."
"Please stay by my side...ok?"
"Always."
"...I-"
"No, I promise."
"...."
He gently slipped his arms around her waist, reassuring her. She felt her eyes sting...and she gave up, allowing the stubborn droplets of water that had formed in her eyes to fall...
"Have you ever believed in someone with your entire heart?"
"Yes."

SHINJITE
CHAPTER ONE: HEART

(heehee,i wont post this just yet..)
what i did post was the beginning to one o mi mangas.
anyone likes?
lemme have comments! ^^
i do drawings and char sketches an stuff, we can post those too here?
(sorry,i dun do poetry ne more..>.<)
its ok for mi to put stories ne?i think im like the first....

Paine · « **Reply #28 on:** November 28, 2003, 11:52:41 PM »

--PROLOGUE--

"Break apart my heart, because a red sorrow is spilling out from it...I want to smash it to pieces. As if I were screaming, I call out your name...But feeling isn't just by chance I call out to you now, with my tears...so just who are you? Sadness and happiness repeat themselves again. Forget everything, break it all off. Please don't embrace my longing secretly in your arms...because I'm fine just the way I am."
"..."
"Please stay by my side...ok?"
"Always."
"...I-"
"No, I promise."
"...."
He gently slipped his arms around her waist, reassuring her. She felt her eyes sting...and she gave up, allowing the stubborn droplets of water that had formed in her eyes to fall...
"Have you ever believed in someone with your entire heart?"
"Yes."

SHINJITE
CHAPTER ONE: HEART

(heehee,i wont post this just yet..)
what i did post was the beginning to one o mi mangas.
anyone likes?
lemme have comments! ^^
i do drawings and char sketches an stuff, we can post those too here?
(sorry,i dun do poetry ne more..>.<)
its ok for mi to put stories ne?i think im like the first....sorry if i disrupted anything

Paine · « **Reply #29 on:** November 28, 2003, 11:54:09 PM »

i know it sounds like a bunch a tabanka crap but it isnt.

Anonymous · « **Reply #30 on:** November 28, 2003, 11:59:02 PM »

Ur stuff is welcomed here Paine
and it is not to bad, would like to see more of it
and bring anything else u got, i sure ppl wont mind the drawings and ting

The_Dark_Goddess · « **Reply #31 on:** November 29, 2003, 06:36:09 PM »

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Ur stuff is welcomed here Paine
and it is not to bad, would like to see more of it
and bring anything else u got, i sure ppl wont mind the drawings and ting

ditto on pinkie, plus the pics to go with writing will clear up any misunderstanding we may have about anything we read, so i welcome the pics if u can put them up

lol, it doesn sound a lil loveydovey but i prefer to give it the benfit of the doubt, so bring it on girl!!!

Imperial_X · « **Reply #32 on:** November 29, 2003, 07:33:46 PM »

Death will befall the greatest of men amidst the tides of a tempestuous sea of unbridled fury....Such is my will. - The Imperialist.

The_Dark_Goddess · « **Reply #33 on:** November 29, 2003, 10:15:40 PM »

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Death will befall the greatest of men amidst the tides of a tempestuous sea of unbridled fury....Such is my will. - The Imperialist.

i like it.
but what is it?

Anonymous · « **Reply #34 on:** November 29, 2003, 10:24:13 PM »

Yea im still tryin to understand it

~*Ashiee*~ · « **Reply #35 on:** November 29, 2003, 10:34:54 PM »

what is this?
dark goddess plz explain

The_Dark_Goddess · « **Reply #36 on:** November 29, 2003, 10:36:52 PM »

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what is this?
dark goddess plz explain

explain what?

~*Ashiee*~ · « **Reply #37 on:** November 29, 2003, 10:43:26 PM »

ok apparently we both confused lol

*sits back*

*knows not to visit here anymore*

allyuh have fun

Guru · « **Reply #38 on:** November 30, 2003, 12:48:29 AM »

Showtime, the dark goddess beckons,
an imperial force thay cannot be denied,
tho unseen bullets whisper past
The paine carries us swiftly
her flippant voice guiding our tired hands
pinkie grasping pen tightly as we
bare our soul hoping
to be found worthy
of the critical GATT eye

The_Dark_Goddess · « **Reply #39 on:** November 30, 2003, 01:57:38 AM »

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Showtime, the dark goddess beckons,
an imperial force thay cannot be denied,
tho unseen bullets whisper past
The paine carries us swiftly
her flippant voice guiding our tired hands
pinkie grasping pen tightly as we
bare our soul hoping
to be found worthy
of the critical GATT eye

that's kewl :-D

Carigamers · « **Reply #39 on:** November 30, 2003, 01:57:38 AM »

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