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Poetry
« on: October 20, 2006, 07:54:26 AM »
Does anyone on this forum write poetry or think that they can................I think that there shud b a thread for this....jus for ppl to display their "talent" and get positive critism from others......

I know this thread gonna die miserably but let it be...I wanna start somthing positive


  Thsi is kinda lame but WTHel

Separated by one chair
We share random glances
The beauty that u hold
Compares to no other
THe love that I possess
Is so complex that I cant understand
Why do I love you
Maybe Its your eyes
maybe its your hair
maybe its the way u run to me
Wen your in fear
Do u love me?
Thats a question
That i'll never get an answer
YES! Is wat I want you to say
But I'll respect your decision*
If you want to stay away
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Poetry
« on: October 20, 2006, 07:54:26 AM »

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Re: Poetry
« Reply #1 on: October 20, 2006, 08:01:12 AM »
...


*wonders if he should really post a poem*
What can you do to end the hunger?
It's no surprise that many will die with the coming shortage of food
When there is no grain to feed the butchered cows
When there is nothing to feed yourselves...
Then you will see that money can't be eaten.

-The Locust

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Re: Poetry
« Reply #2 on: October 20, 2006, 08:35:03 AM »
if u do others will
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Re: Poetry
« Reply #3 on: October 20, 2006, 08:40:37 AM »
I told a girl this once...

Ahem...

Roses are red
Violets are black,
Enough of this $#it
Let's jump in the sack!


THE END!


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Re: Poetry
« Reply #4 on: October 20, 2006, 08:52:07 AM »
and u still alive.........thats skillz
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Re: Poetry
« Reply #5 on: October 20, 2006, 09:22:09 AM »
Flip, that's hilarious. A winner for sure.

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Re: Poetry
« Reply #6 on: October 20, 2006, 10:21:44 AM »
*follows suit*

Roses are red
Violets are blue
This line doesn't rhyme
...and neither does this one

>_>


Okay...I'm kidding...

Here we go.


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a bomb


Umber toadstools rise on the horizon
A fiery fungus infects this world
The lingering blare of muted sirens...
Humiliated echoes in hollow holes

"Oh anticipated glorified angel bring
This shrieking heaven of brimstone amber!"

Her dialted horrifed pupil sings
This rushing sunset's inaudible aria



(Sing a song of falling bombs
And unnatural disasters
The searing storm before the calm
That murdered all the laughter)



What can you do to end the hunger?
It's no surprise that many will die with the coming shortage of food
When there is no grain to feed the butchered cows
When there is nothing to feed yourselves...
Then you will see that money can't be eaten.

-The Locust

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Re: Poetry
« Reply #7 on: October 20, 2006, 11:50:23 AM »
gr8 synch chakra for u

shaking the earth
making it quiver
all of the human race
begins to shiver

Howling like a wolf
It destroys our houses
we all run in fear
wenever it gets near

it illuminates the night
with a flash of shocking light
in the past many hav died
by the power of this giant's might
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Re: Poetry
« Reply #8 on: October 20, 2006, 12:04:32 PM »
hmm there was a poetry thread up before but lol :S thas to way back



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Re: Poetry
« Reply #9 on: October 20, 2006, 04:57:43 PM »
RUDE poem BEWARE
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Roses are red
Violets are green
I love your legs
ANd everything inbetween


sry bout that
________________________________________________________________

This is not mine....it just cool
 
  SHE HATES POEMS

How many of you
Ever wrote a poem for someone
How many of you
Thought poetry was fun

When someone breaks your heart
Poetry is the only cure
You feel like an artist
As it is an art so pure

How Lucky you poets are. As you
Give out messages to whom you love
For me, a poem can not do anything
As my love is complicated and tough

Look ,how destiny plays games with me
The person whom I write for
She hates poems and poetry
Then how can I write anymore?

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Re: Poetry
« Reply #10 on: October 20, 2006, 05:22:05 PM »
She hates the way I say her name,
Dancing around my affections,
Drowning me in her picture frame,
Choking out deep inflections,
She just wants to love herself,
I just want to learn to dream,
She makes me forget myself,
Burying me again in cream,
She takes away all the pain,
I forget what it means to be
Making me want it back again,
I like the sea,
She likes the sky,
But it never rains .
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Re: Poetry
« Reply #11 on: October 20, 2006, 07:59:55 PM »
i wudda give u chakra but umm....ures already soo low....if i give it will go down..........(doh study it) cool poem*_*
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Re: Poetry
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