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Showcase / The Poetry Thread.........
« on: February 03, 2004, 07:04:18 PM »
Questions
     
As the world revolves
And the skies turn blue
I will always ask
Why I had to love you

As I look at our pictures
And think of your smile
I'll wonder why
I thought you worthwhile

When I cry on my pillow
And sob to the sky
I'll continue to ask the question-
Why?

Why did you change?
Where did it go wrong?
Why didn't you try to
Make it last long?

Why was it hard?
What did I ever lack?
The hardest question now is...
Why can't you love me back?                    

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Showcase / Writer's anyone?
« on: February 03, 2004, 06:35:16 PM »
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Very impressive additions here I see. Quite admirable work from some very talented writers. And I thought me and DG were alone with writing when we got here :P Seen some nice work from Chaos, Aka_Neo, G_Pinkie and many others. *thumbs up*

We should work on something together at a time. I'd be quite interested in that idea.

Now...I have a bit of a problem here. My short stories and some of my characters are a bit...unorthodox...to some persons. I know GATT has quite a few of these 'phobes *will not call names* As a writer, I consider my work to be unique in its own way, depsite what other people criticise of its content. Now, I accept good criticism always in a friendly way-but all-out condoning of my work I will not accept in a friendly manner.

To be straightforward-some of my work contains some offbeat content and some homosexual content and characters with 'differen't aspects. Now, before you start throwing knives and boos etc, these characters are of MY creation and these writings aren't meant as pornography but as human or otherwise creature expression of emotions thought of by every person.

This having been said-I'd like to know now-as part to see what type of persons and writers we have here...should I post a sample of this type of work, would I get some PRODUCTIVE and UNBIASED commentary?


My god man, are u on the other side???????????                    

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Showcase / The Poetry Thread.........
« on: January 28, 2004, 05:29:19 PM »
boy chaos doh study dem boy if yuh have talent show it dey jus jealous they eh have lyrics and dey trying to keep yuh down.but dey cant keep d general down boy..fire fih dem jus blaze jed..lata                    

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PC Gaming / what is the most annoying thing about video games?
« on: January 27, 2004, 10:52:33 PM »
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i feel they only do that because that is akuma death move.........next ting u know if they showed ot plenty ppl would of wanted to learn that move and real ppl would get ah beat down heck some ppl might die

Didn't you read my post?  Killing ppl using Shun Goku Satst is like the desired effect.



like u aint see his name?
 aka->sounds like akah-> sounds like c@c@ = sH!+ and that seems to be wat he does be posting cuz like he cant seem to read an understand wat ppl saying or reading..for instance, did u see the writers anyone? its a place for composed stories not a summary of one. anyway wuh ah goh say, d name says it all

buh bye  :)                    

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Ole Talk / So....who do you think you are?
« on: January 27, 2004, 10:36:52 PM »
i am demented....
i speak my mind.
anything else?                    

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Showcase / Writer's anyone?
« on: January 27, 2004, 06:23:36 PM »
neo u sure that is ah story? it is a writers forum not an analysis forum..o gosh man actually read and understand wat u goin an post nah and where yuh goin an post it. i dunno if other ppl aint realise that it IS NOT A STORY or allyuh aint smart enough to realise wuh he post cuz it kinda obvious as u read the first line..any comments mods???...

just a thought  :)                    

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Showcase / Writer's anyone?
« on: January 14, 2004, 05:24:08 PM »
wait wait wait..this thing happenin again but jus is like gsi ppl taking over this place..wam tuh all ah allyuh other ppl allyuh cyah write oh wuh.wuh is it really goin on jed                    

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Ole Talk / do you play any sports?
« on: January 05, 2004, 09:19:56 PM »
u talking about sense...u should take ur own advice i aint the one with the spammer rank....                    

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Ole Talk / What will the new year bring
« on: January 03, 2004, 03:23:02 PM »
hmmm d new...i sense more rum...more sweats...and more rum                    

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Ole Talk / What wrong with girls/boys?
« on: January 03, 2004, 03:12:48 PM »
allyah makin love connection with splits or what                    

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Ole Talk / do you play any sports?
« on: January 03, 2004, 03:06:44 PM »
ah feel where yuh comin from....but yuh ever hear of freedom of speech....anyway ah goh see wuh ah could do                    

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Showcase / Writer's anyone?
« on: December 31, 2003, 01:55:16 PM »
wuh d @$$ like is only 2 writers it have or wuh? dey so dread they take over d thread...godess care to comment..                    

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PC Gaming / WHAT GAMES GIVE YOU THE RUSH
« on: December 31, 2003, 01:50:30 PM »
silent hill  :D  :D  :D                    

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Ole Talk / do you play any sports?
« on: December 31, 2003, 01:27:53 PM »
ah now come an dye how allyuh goh treat a bredren...                    

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Ole Talk / do you play any sports?
« on: December 30, 2003, 02:36:03 PM »
yes as a matter of fact i do...i take part in bathroom activities..does that count??                    

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Ole Talk / Is there a higher power?
« on: December 30, 2003, 02:32:19 PM »
yeaaaa but did u ever hear ppl die before dere time? was that dere destiny? in the case of suicide were dey suppose to kill themselves or like a car crash caused by another..hmmm???                    

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Ole Talk / What wrong with girls/boys?
« on: December 30, 2003, 02:20:54 PM »
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hehehe  

can someone tell me why after netime i am with a girl  
my fingers smell of smoke herring  

hehehehe



LET THE FLAMING BEGIN!



how come horse...like she doh wash or wuh...go ahead it goh bite yuh one ah desse days.
ps..check fuh red spots... :D                    

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Ole Talk / What wrong with girls/boys?
« on: December 28, 2003, 07:18:30 PM »
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girls do smell nice.... i think it would be the oestrogen/testosterone thingy....

or 80% of all girls use the same perfume



its called pheremones...not iestrogen and testosterone thing dye d hormone thingy                    

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Ole Talk / What wrong with girls/boys?
« on: December 28, 2003, 03:19:38 PM »
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Girls smell nice


which part yuh smelling BoB hmmm??? yuh sure it was clean or just had perfume tuh fool yuh                    

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