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« on: September 05, 2004, 12:22:25 AM »
ok this was inspired by reaper's thread
come one gatters express your literary side and post your poems...

here is one of mine...
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Caged- by Asha Sooknanan (28/05/2001)

I sit in this cage,
Everyday I pray to get out
The doors are open,
My freedom is granted
Yet I cannot leave,
Not because I have no choice,
Not because I have not tried
But because deep down
I know that I will die
I will die without the love we share
I will die without your care
And though I might not die physically
My heart will surely despair!
For I love the way you touch me
The way you make me feel
And though I know it’s present
I question it being real
I still think you play me
In all the things you do
And when I tell u this
You tell me it’s not true
I need you in my life
Much more than I think you know
But I need to know for now if this love is going to grow
Is t going to blossom like the beautiful little flower?
Or
Is it going to wither and die as it does in it’s latest hour?
I need to know this baby
You need to tell me now
Break my heart if you have to
Tear it to shreds
Stomp it to bits
Eat it raw
Just let me out this cage
I truly need to leave it
Even if it mean I have to die
So kill me now inside it
And let my spirit fly!
.....
now remember this was written 3yrs ago                    

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« Reply #1 on: September 05, 2004, 05:20:18 AM »
Thanks splits and awesome poem keep em coming!!!                    


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« Reply #2 on: September 07, 2004, 12:28:22 AM »
kool, this is not one of mine, but one i came across on the net

Got up this Morning

Had nothing to eat

Headed straight to the Doubles Man

First one I could meet
 

 I said gimme 4 slight

Cause I didnt trust the pepper

Didnt know that what Id get

Was 2 days of Diarrhea

 

Diarrhea ..All day on the Toilet Bowl

Diarrhea .. so bad I was sweating cold

Diarrhea ... so bad I couldnt leave my home

Diarrhea ..  sitting on the bowl all alone

 

Now Ive been at it for hours

Not a moment Id like to savor

But it got pretty worse

Cause I ran out of toilet paper

 

Then I got a call from a girl I like

Said shes in front my gate

Didnt know Diarrhea

Would decide my fate

 

Diarrhea  .. God I had it so bad

Diarrhea ..  the worst that Ive ever had

Diarrhea  making my stomach gripe

Diarrhea  .. with nothing to wipe

 

So I tore out my pocket

And did the best I could

Went outside and met the girl

Said she was in the neighborhood

 

Then she came up at me quietly

I got the feeling of doom

Cause I knew I was busted

Cause she wanted to use the bathroom

 

Diarrhea making me insane

Diarrhea couldnt take the pain

Diarrhea Now I felt to die

Diarrhea so bad it made me cry

 

Then she entered the bathroom

I remembered my coat

I think I remember the pocket

Still in the toilet afloat

 

Then I heard a fearsome Growl

Like a demon from Hell

Seems that girl inside

Had some Doubles as well

 

Diarrhea Im no longer alone

Diarrhea No more reason to moan

Diarrhea Now I was having a ball

Diarrhea Its not so bad after all                    

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« Reply #3 on: September 07, 2004, 08:44:09 AM »
Such sweet Poetry...my ears are burning!

I don't know who wrote it, but I always remember it!

She stood on a bridge at midnight,
Her lips were all a quiver.
She gave a cough,
Her leg fell off
And floated down the river!
                   

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« Reply #3 on: September 07, 2004, 08:44:09 AM »

 


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